请问“a self contained manner”是什么意思
一个评阅人在评阅意见中提出“Abstract should be revised to clearly explain the methods in a self contained manner”,请问“a self contained manner”是什么意思? 返回小木虫查看更多
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一个评阅人在评阅意见中提出“Abstract should be revised to clearly explain the methods in a self contained manner”,请问“a self contained manner”是什么意思? 返回小木虫查看更多
应该是用自己的方式去写,不是参照别人的方法,把你的abstract内容讲清楚。不要断断续续,把要说的内容拼凑完了事,应该做到连贯,能够让别人可以一口气读下去,不会产生停顿感,那就差不多了。
我的摘要的写法没有参照现有文献的格式,初写时有些句子也经过国外一个专家的修改。也找过教英语的老师看过,她认为我的写法还是很有特色。后来还经过一个专门机构的润稿,感觉读起来也很通顺。我刚又读了一篇,觉得有一个地方上下衔接不够好。不知道还有没有其他情况?
应该是用自己的方式去写,把abstract内容讲清楚
我觉得如果是这个意思,就有点奇怪了。难道我的摘要不是按自己而是按别人的方式写的吗?虽然用了几个能吸引人眼球的词,但不能因为说用了几个这样的词就不是按自己的方式写的了?感到很奇怪?
self contained manner的意思是摘要就像是一只麻雀,虽然短小精悍,但是整个内容完整,逻辑清楚,自成体系。完全不是所谓的用自己的方式去写这样的意思
下面是我摘要的基本格式和内容:
This study describes an efficient multi-level **** for solving ****.First, the essential backbone is ****, which is coupled with **** based on****. Two rules, namely ** and **, are constructed to illustrate the mechanism of ****. ****is introduced to demonstrate the process of ****. To shed light onto the edge selection rules, the concepts of ****,and **** are subsequently proposed to describe the internal structure of ****. Based on the above-mentioned concepts, the methods relating to selection and evaluation of**** are designed to make ** more effective. Further, some strategies, such as **, and **, can direct the algorithm to search focusing on those promising spaces. Finally, ** is tested on seven benchmark test sets. The experimental results show that ** has better performance than several state-of-the-art algorithms.
在上述用词中,只有the essential backbone和shed light onto是一个国外教授在早期给我的摘要修改中给出的词。其他的句子都是按照论文的内容写的,难道有什么问题吗
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现在读起来,感觉To shed light onto the edge selection rules和上文有点不连贯,上文最后说到某一过程,如果将它改成To shed light onto the edge selection rules in the process of ****,就要好多了。