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有哪位高人能帮我看看这句英文表述哪里有语病啊?谢谢了!

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Similarly, the prediction errors of the transverse inherent deformation exhibit a distribution similar to that of longitudinal inherent deformation, most of which are less than 6% and 10% for training and testing samples,respectively.

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  • agar

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    8楼: Originally posted by 无名小冰冰 at 2017-10-31 21:01:22
    是的,which指代的是离其比较近的名词,但这句话的主语是the prediction errors of the transverse inherent deformation,主语比较长,如果想用这个主语,就变成了most of the prediction errors of the transver ...

    可以用另一句most of the errors,但不改变句子结构不可以用most of which。也可以改用插入语,比如Similarly, the prediction errors of the transverse inherent deformation,most of which were less than 6% for training and 10% for testing samples, exhibited a distribution similar to that of longitudinal inherent deformation

  • 无名小冰冰

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    9楼: Originally posted by agar at 2017-11-01 06:41:33
    可以用另一句most of the errors,但不改变句子结构不可以用most of which。也可以改用插入语,比如Similarly, the prediction errors of the transverse inherent deformation,most of which were less than 6%  ...

    谢谢,你的英文语法掌握的确实是好。

  • 无名小冰冰

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    9楼: Originally posted by agar at 2017-11-01 06:41:33
    可以用另一句most of the errors,但不改变句子结构不可以用most of which。也可以改用插入语,比如Similarly, the prediction errors of the transverse inherent deformation,most of which were less than 6%  ...

    不过用插入语,是否可以用一般现在时,还是必须得写成一般过去式?

  • agar

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    11楼: Originally posted by 无名小冰冰 at 2017-11-01 08:04:12
    不过用插入语,是否可以用一般现在时,还是必须得写成一般过去式?...

    用过去式

  • chshch472

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    12楼: Originally posted by agar at 2017-11-01 12:33:22
    用过去式...

    个人感觉这种前后两个对应的名词,在后句中引用时直接用the former one/the latter one就可以了。
    英语也讲究精炼,两句没间隔,不需要再重复描述。
    貌似很多文献就这么用的。

  • 无名小冰冰

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    13楼: Originally posted by chshch472 at 2017-11-01 16:12:00
    个人感觉这种前后两个对应的名词,在后句中引用时直接用the former one/the latter one就可以了。
    英语也讲究精炼,两句没间隔,不需要再重复描述。
    貌似很多文献就这么用的。...

    用the former one/the latter one,单复数不好对应。

  • chshch472

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    14楼: Originally posted by 无名小冰冰 at 2017-11-01 16:22:39
    用the former one/the latter one,单复数不好对应。...

    用ones

  • chshch472

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    14楼: Originally posted by 无名小冰冰 at 2017-11-01 16:22:39
    用the former one/the latter one,单复数不好对应。...

    或者用error/errors代替one/ones

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