求修改句子 该怎么表达呢
A total of 17 amino acids were determined , which mainly contained Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp et al.
A total of 17 amino acids were determined , and among them Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp were the main types.
这两种说法正确吗 哪种更准确呢？坐等 谢谢
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都不对，问题出在措辞是典型的中式表达。第一句为下面这么多词都可以用什么用contain,第二句非常 awkward 母语的人决不会这么写句子
which were:
dominated by
mainly composed of
mainly comprised of
mainly constituted of
mainly made up of
is mainly of
is mainly of ---不小心堆积出错
，
第一句语法正确，但似乎有点中国人感觉。第二句语法有点问题，英语中两个句子没有逗号，如果需要，则添加并列连接词，或者使用从句结构
直接把定语从句插进句子里，或者添加一个插入语不就完了
楼主的用词是不对，使得句子含意显得不准确。如果我来写的话，会选择简单清晰的表述，比如：
17 amino acids have been assessed. Each has Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp and other 3 fatty acids as major components.