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Points detracting

The paper is well organised and understandable in its present form. However, attention should be given to improving the grammatical English. This should generally improve the overall presentation for publication, but would also help the reader to interpret exactly what the authors are trying to convey at one or two places in the text. This may also give some opportunity to précis some parts of the text.

Reference 22 in the Introduction section would appear to be out of order in the text compared with its position in the Reference list.

It may be worthwhile emphasising what specifically is new in the study as well as what is more confirmatory of previously published studies on this and Al and its alloys. That said, it is likely that much more is known about the behaviour of this Al alloy system than is available in the published literature.@Monash2011 返回小木虫查看更多