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请高手看看下面这句话错在哪里，怎么改呢？

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garlett

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8楼: Originally posted by okjack_chen at 2016-06-13 15:37:26
those who indulge themselves in the Internet should cast sight onto the friendship and kinship in real life

谢谢你了
garlett

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7楼: Originally posted by mac194 at 2016-06-13 09:28:55
People who overindulge in internet activities
  should get more involved with friends and loves ones
         ^
OR find time to be with .... more often

  cast = 抛
...

太感谢你了，想了好久不知道怎么改呢
，
garlett

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3楼: Originally posted by kitos at 2016-06-12 23:06:11
也许themselves可以省去。

可能我没有把上文给弄出来，大家有点看不明白了，不过还是谢谢你了。
garlett

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4楼: Originally posted by swordzheng at 2016-06-13 07:44:22
indulged

可能我没有把上文给弄出来，大家有点看不明白了，不过还是谢谢你了。
garlett

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5楼: Originally posted by vbxn at 2016-06-13 08:53:46
Those who indulge themselves with the Internet should cast their eye over the friendship and kinship in real life.

可能我没有把上文给弄出来，大家有点看不明白了，不过还是谢谢你了。
garlett

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6楼: Originally posted by vbxn at 2016-06-13 08:57:08
把in换成with, 把eyesight改成eye, 把to改成over.

可能我没有把上文给弄出来，大家有点看不明白了，不过还是谢谢你了。
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Those who are indulged themselves into the Internet should cast their eyesight to the friendship and kinship in real life.