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garlett

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[求助] 请高手看看下面这句话错在哪里,怎么改呢? 已有2人参与

Those who indulge themselves in the Internet should cast their eyesight to the friendship and kinship in real life.
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全部都错了,我完全没看懂。
2楼2016-06-12 20:16:30
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those who indulge themselves in the Internet should cast sight onto the friendship and kinship in real life

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8楼2016-06-13 15:37:26
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也许themselves可以省去。
一条菜板上的鱼.....
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Those who indulge themselves with the Internet should cast their eye over the friendship and kinship in real life.

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把in换成with, 把eyesight改成eye, 把to改成over.

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People who overindulge in internet activities                  [1]
  should get more involved with friends and loves ones
           ^
    OR   find time to be with .... more often

  cast = 抛
  cast a line = 钓鱼投线
    NOT cast eyesight to
    BUT cast an eye towards __ = 朝 __ 快描一眼          [2]

[1] indulge occasionally = OK
     overindulge to the point of near addiction = not OK

[2] set one's sights on ... // keep an eye on ...   <- NOT enough correction
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garlett

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8楼: Originally posted by okjack_chen at 2016-06-13 15:37:26
those who indulge themselves in the Internet should cast sight onto the friendship and kinship in real life

谢谢你了
人活着要开心点,人间不值得。
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garlett

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7楼: Originally posted by mac194 at 2016-06-13 09:28:55
People who overindulge in internet activities                  
  should get more involved with friends and loves ones
           ^
    OR   find time to be with .... more often

  cast = 抛
   ...

太感谢你了,想了好久不知道怎么改呢
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