请高手看看下面这句话错在哪里,怎么改呢?
Those who indulge themselves in the Internet should cast their eyesight to the friendship and kinship in real life.
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Those who indulge themselves in the Internet should cast their eyesight to the friendship and kinship in real life.
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全部都错了,我完全没看懂。
也许themselves可以省去。
indulged
Those who indulge themselves with the Internet should cast their eye over the friendship and kinship in real life.
把in换成with, 把eyesight改成eye, 把to改成over.
People who overindulge in internet activities [1]
should get more involved with friends and loves ones
^
OR find time to be with .... more often
cast = 抛
cast a line = 钓鱼投线
NOT cast eyesight to
BUT cast an eye towards __ = 朝 __ 快描一眼 [2]
[1] indulge occasionally = OK
overindulge to the point of near addiction = not OK
[2] set one's sights on ... // keep an eye on ... <- NOT enough correction,
those who indulge themselves in the Internet should cast sight onto the friendship and kinship in real life