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请高手看看下面这句话错在哪里,怎么改呢?

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Those who indulge themselves in the Internet should cast their eyesight to the friendship and kinship in real life. 返回小木虫查看更多

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  • cliakro

    全部都错了,我完全没看懂。

  • kitos

    也许themselves可以省去。

  • swordzheng

    indulged

  • vbxn

    Those who indulge themselves with the Internet should cast their eye over the friendship and kinship in real life.

  • vbxn

    把in换成with, 把eyesight改成eye, 把to改成over.

  • mac194

    People who overindulge in internet activities                  [1]
      should get more involved with friends and loves ones
               ^
        OR   find time to be with .... more often

      cast = 抛
      cast a line = 钓鱼投线
        NOT cast eyesight to
        BUT cast an eye towards __ = 朝 __ 快描一眼          [2]

    [1] indulge occasionally = OK
         overindulge to the point of near addiction = not OK

    [2] set one's sights on ... // keep an eye on ...   <- NOT enough correction,

  • okjack_chen

    those who indulge themselves in the Internet should cast sight onto the friendship and kinship in real life

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