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759986494

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[交流] 求帮忙看看这两个句子对不?

1.In the adsorption process, the focus of research was obtaining an abundant and inexpensive adsorbent with high adsorption capacity.
2. In recent years, the researches' attention have been turned to the agricultural, industrial and forest waste materials.
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759986494

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第二个句子应该是:In recent years, the researches' attention have been turned to the agricultural, industrial and forest waste materials owing to their local availability, abundant and cost-effectiveness。
2楼2014-08-25 16:51:04
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不大合适,对于具体的专业只是我不懂,不过我觉得从英语角度讲应该做以下修改:第一个句子中的was obtaining应该改为was to obtain
第二个句子中的have 应该改为has。

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3楼2014-08-25 18:18:06
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greenhand_ku: 金币+2, 应助指数+1, 本版对于应助者采取鼓励态度,对于应助及时(少于2天),版主将视情况额外给与1-2金奖励。 2014-09-04 19:20:32
1.?3?
2. In recent years, the researchERS' attention haS been turned to the agricultural, industrial and forest waste materials.
OR:
2. In recent years, the attention of researches has been turned to the agricultural, industrial and forest waste materials.
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759986494

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4楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2014-08-25 19:09:03
1.同3楼
2. In recent years, the researchERS' attention haS been turned to the agricultural, industrial and forest waste materials.
OR:
2. In recent years, the attention of researches has been turn ...

been需要去掉不呢
5楼2014-08-25 22:48:18
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5楼: Originally posted by 759986494 at 2014-08-25 09:48:18
been需要去掉不呢...

不需要,in both cases, 主语都是attention,因此需要用has been turned to...
6楼2014-08-25 22:52:37
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greenhand_ku: 金币+1, 应助指数+1, 本版对于应助者采取鼓励态度,对于应助及时(少于2天),版主将视情况额外给与1-2金奖励。 2014-09-04 19:21:05
1. Our research aims to find inexpensive adsorbents that are readily available and highly absorbent   <- 不要用过去式

2. Recently more research has been focused on ....
      或
   Agricultural... waste materials have attracted more research attention recently
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liyangntu

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greenhand_ku: 金币+1, 应助指数+1, 本版对于应助者采取鼓励态度,对于应助及时(少于2天),版主将视情况额外给与1-2金奖励。 2014-09-04 19:21:21
第一句was obtaining感觉用法很怪,建议改成the research was focused on obtaining an....
第二句the researchers' attention听上去也很chinglish,建议改成the interests of researchers have been changed to....

其他没啥问题,表达还是很地道。

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greenhand_ku: 应助指数+1, 奖励应助! 2014-09-04 19:21:55
1.In the adsorption process, the focus of research is to obtain an abundant and inexpensive adsorbent with high adsorption capacity.
2. In recent years, the researches' attention has turned to the agricultural, industrial and forest waste material.
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