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759986494

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[交流] 求帮忙看看这两个句子对不?

1.In the adsorption process, the focus of research was obtaining an abundant and inexpensive adsorbent with high adsorption capacity.
2. In recent years, the researches' attention have been turned to the agricultural, industrial and forest waste materials.
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第一句was obtaining感觉用法很怪,建议改成the research was focused on obtaining an....
第二句the researchers' attention听上去也很chinglish,建议改成the interests of researchers have been changed to....

其他没啥问题,表达还是很地道。

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759986494

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第二个句子应该是:In recent years, the researches' attention have been turned to the agricultural, industrial and forest waste materials owing to their local availability, abundant and cost-effectiveness。
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不大合适,对于具体的专业只是我不懂,不过我觉得从英语角度讲应该做以下修改:第一个句子中的was obtaining应该改为was to obtain
第二个句子中的have 应该改为has。

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1.?3?
2. In recent years, the researchERS' attention haS been turned to the agricultural, industrial and forest waste materials.
OR:
2. In recent years, the attention of researches has been turned to the agricultural, industrial and forest waste materials.
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