“your paper appears conversational”审稿意见中这句话什么意思啊？

审稿意见原文是：“This language used in this paper is conversational and so results in it conveying unclear ideas. The main issue is that cost of the system is used as the main motivation but the cost is not given or compared to the XXX or XXX systems. The performance should also be compared to state of the art. “ 这两个系统成本显著不同，修改时可以加进去。

另一个评阅人则说“The manuscript is well organized and presented. I think that the paper deserves a publciation. ”

总编直接就拒了。。。 返回小木虫查看更多