期刊是Journal of Loss Prevention in the Process Industries


Comments from the editors and reviewers:
This paper could be of interest to the journal readership but not in its present form.
The manuscript requires a comprehensive revision of the use of English grammar. There are numerous instances of incomplete sentences and other grammatical errors.
The main technical difficulty is that the alarm management research results are not adequately related to the journal scope of chemical and process plant safety. (There are also insufficient references drawn from the process safety literature). This will require significant revision of the discussion and conclusions to remedy.


上面也没说是几个审稿人，意见也没有跟文章内容相关的，而且给的是两个月的修改期限，这应该是大修么，这不知道从何下手啊，求助各位大神！

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