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编辑提出四个语句表述不清,现将个人修改好的贴出来,渴望得到热心人的答复,万分感谢。
In the past, however, theory of defects was based on the hypothesis that the whole space or the half-space was homogeneous.

It can be shown from the graphics that the peak of the curves is around 0.9 to 1.3, so the low frequency incidence should be paid attention to.

It can be shown from the graphics that non-dimensional dynamic stress intensity factors shows fluctuating as the distance increases.

However, the fluctuating of curves tend to steady basically when h>10. (大致意思要表达:曲线的波动趋于平稳。)
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  • zhangtt2012

    引用回帖:
    8楼: Originally posted by paperhunter at 2016-06-17 00:01:39
    In the past, however, theory of defects was based on the hypothesis that the whole space or the half-space was homogeneous.
    改为
    However, in the past decades, theory of defects was based on a hypot ...

    。。。based on a hypothesis that the whole。。。

  • vmuch520

    这段文字你想表达的中文是啥呢?

  • paperhunter

    引用回帖:
    8楼: Originally posted by paperhunter at 2016-06-17 00:01:39
    In the past, however, theory of defects was based on the hypothesis that the whole space or the half-space was homogeneous.
    改为
    However, in the past decades, theory of defects was based on a hypot ...

    However, in the past decades, theory of defects was based on a hypothesis, which assumed the whole space or the half-space was homogeneous

  • paperhunter

    However, in the past decades, theory of defects was based on a hypothesis. It is assumed that  the whole space or the half-space was homogeneous.

  • 小小的西瓜籽

    In the past, however, theory of defects was based on the hypothesis that the whole space or the half-space was homogeneous.很别扭

  • 黑色粉笔

    做固体力学的小同行啊,祝福好运

  • joyhnust

    把so 换成thus,paid attention to 改成taken into account。两个句式前面相同,改变一个吧

  • yyhong0612

    shown 出现的次数太多了。

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