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7.09 J/cm3 with an efficiency of 88% was achieved at room temperature, and also showed the stable energy-storage behavior, which is almost 3 times higher than that (2.43 J/cm3) of the bulk ceramics counterparts."
shall be modified to :
"As a result, a maximum recoverable energy-storage density of
7.09 J/cm3 with an efficiency of 88% was achieved at room temperature, together with stable energy-storage behavior, which is almost 3 times higher than that (2.43 J/cm3) of the bulk ceramics counterparts."
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这技术审查以前不是这样的� ,
需要的,是编辑这关没有过。
那可就太多了 几乎要重写啦
有可能是技术审查吧,或者编辑正好是你研究方向这块的,比较懂,以致于他觉得你手稿需要修改
The above paper may possibly be of some technical interest. Nevertheless for its submission to the review process English of the whole paper will require revision efforts.
For example the following sentence of the Abstract:
"As a result, a maximum recoverable energy-storage density of
7.09 J/cm3 with an efficiency of 88% was achieved at room temperature, and also showed the stable energy-storage behavior, which is almost 3 times higher than that (2.43 J/cm3) of the bulk ceramics counterparts."
shall be modified to :
"As a result, a maximum recoverable energy-storage density of
7.09 J/cm3 with an efficiency of 88% was achieved at room temperature, together with stable energy-storage behavior, which is almost 3 times higher than that (2.43 J/cm3) of the bulk ceramics counterparts."
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这技术审查以前不是这样的�
,
又是储能,直接叫你润色英语,是elsevier
是啊,英语水平不行,看样子是要被锯掉了