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One of the classical Lock & Lock water bottles mainly consists of a dark blue lid and an insoluble body is column in shape. This kind of water bottle was made of BPA free material not only for lightweight but also for tough and it can holds approximately 700 mL of liquid. Two openings are designed in the bottle. The big one can injected water is just like a mouth which comprised by the body. Six textured plots can be found on both sides of the body for easy handing while drinking. To lock the lid through the raised inside the lid and outside the mouth. A wrist strap is connected to a circle which arounded on the mouth for easy grip to take on the go. A prominent small mouth is attached to the lid can be used to drink if you would not like to spill the liquid. To cover the small opening a little white shell joined. Flip open the top makes it easy to get a quick sip. 返回小木虫查看更多

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  • mac194

    Environmentally conscious Lock&Lock, Corp makes an ergonomic flip-top bottle with finger-shaped depressions for easier grip.  A wrist strap is included, securely fastened to an eyelet on the bottle and not the snap-on (?) cap


      "... To lock the lid through the raised inside the lid and outside the mouth... "
    (?) = 是拧上 (twist-on) 或卡上 (snap-on)  ???

  • mac194

    更好:
    Public health conscious Lock&Lock, Corp makes a BPA-free ergonomic flip-top bottle with finger-shaped depressions for easier grip.  A wrist strap is included, securely fastened to a eyelet protruding from the bottle, not the snap-on (?) cap

  • kxmytmy

    引用回帖:
    10楼: Originally posted by mac194 at 2015-11-12 09:45:52
    更好:
    Public health conscious Lock&Lock, Corp makes a BPA-free ergonomic flip-top bottle with finger-shaped depressions for easier grip.  A wrist strap is included, securely fastened to a eyelet ...

    谢谢大神,膜拜

  • kxmytmy

    引用回帖:
    2楼: Originally posted by wang8102 at 2015-11-12 01:43:42
    水平有限,读起来基本没啥语法错误,但表达很别扭,需要大神精修

    水平太有限,写出来的自己都读着别扭,就是不会改

  • sytucom

    我来试一试啦,献丑了。
    One of the classical Lock & Lock water bottles mainly consisting of a dark blue lid and an insoluble body is column in shape. This kind of water bottle is made of BPA free materials not only for lightweight but also for tough and holds approximately 700 mL of liquid. Two openings are designed in the bottle. The big one, which can be injected water like a mouth, comprises part of the body. Six textured plots can be found on both sides of the body for easy handing while drinking. (To lock the lid through the raised inside the lid and outside the mouth (这句话完全看不懂)). In order to grip easily, awrist strap is connected to a circle which is around the mouth. A prominent small mouth which is attached to the lid can be used to drink if you do not like to spill the liquid. Additionaly, a little white shell is designed to cover the small opening, and it is convenient to get a quick sip by flip the button on the top,

  • sytucom

    我只修改了语法,其他的没有修改。毕竟对你描述的产品不是很了解。

  • 慕亦凝

    引用回帖:
    9楼: Originally posted by mac194 at 2015-11-12 09:11:47
    Environmentally conscious Lock&Lock, Corp makes an ergonomic flip-top bottle with finger-shaped depressions for easier grip.  A wrist strap is included, securely fastened to an eyelet on the bott ...

    请总结在一起,这是刷应助吗,小心我扣你金币哦

  • kxmytmy

    引用回帖:
    13楼: Originally posted by sytucom at 2015-11-12 17:20:28
    我来试一试啦,献丑了。
    One of the classical Lock & Lock water bottles mainly consisting of a dark blue lid and an insoluble body is column in shape. This kind of water bottle is made of BPA free ...

    腻害呀描写的是乐扣的一个杯子,哈哈 好久不写英文,练练,结果就成了拼凑

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