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求虫友们帮忙看看这句英文该怎么改

作者 mluckydong
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各位热心的虫友们:
      感谢大家一直以来对我们这些论文写作新手们的支持,小弟以前问的几个问题,都得到了热心虫友的回答,而且这些虫友都有着很棒的学术和英语水平。小弟当前遇到另外一个棘手问题,在此恳请虫友们帮忙,望大家不吝赐教。
      言归正传,小修论文,编辑提了一个问题,是针对我摘要里面的一句话,
摘要里面的原话为“In this case, CO is inapplicable because of the infeasible region formed by the conflicting linear approximations.”。
编辑给出的comment为“Early in the abstract you say "because of the infeasible region formed by the conflicting linear approximations. " Even non-conflicting constraints have a region which is not feasible. Possibly you mean that the conflicting constraints lead to a problem that does not have any feasible region.”
小弟的困惑是:我想把这句话按编辑的话改过来,是“In this case,CO is inapplicable because  the conflicting  constraints lead to a problem that does not have any feasible region”。但会有以下几个问题,
(1)编辑用了 conflicting  constraints ,而我论文里面是 conflicting linear approximations,其实我所说的 conflicting linear approximations也就是 conflicting  constraints ,那么亲爱的虫友们我是改成上面小弟所说的,还是改成“In this case,CO is inapplicable because  the conflicting  linear approximations lead to a problem that does not have any feasible region”
(2)请问亲爱的虫子们编辑这句话“the conflicting  constraints lead to a problem that does not have any feasible region”有语病吗?怎么总感觉that后面有点问题呢?但是小弟不敢乱改,因为编辑是地道的美国人,本领域顶级的大牛(70多岁的老教授)。
小弟备受以上问题困扰,望好心虫友不吝赐教。 返回小木虫查看更多

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