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robot121

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[交流] 虫友们给看看审稿人的意见,还有机会吗?

虫友们,帮忙看看审稿人的意见,看看是否有机会中哦!谢谢!
Reviewers' comments:


The paper reports the structure and properties of (AlCrMnMoNiZrB0.1)Nx coatings. These multielement coatings are rather new and original. However the quality of the paper needs to be improved. Please see the following comments:

1. Grammar errors occur throughout the paper; English needs to be improved. Some errors are even technical.
Just to name a few:
P3, L10        XRD stands for "X-ray Diffraction", not "X-ray diffractometer".
P3, L12        Surface morphology is typically "observed" instead of "obtained".
P8, L8         Verb is mssing in this sentence.
P8, L9         This while sentence is ambiguous.
Please perform a thorough check and have native speaker check your English.

2. The Boron content in your target should be only 1.64 at.%. But the EPMA results suggest that the alloy film have a B content of ~9 at.%. This is almost six times higher than that in the target and is very unusual. How did this happen? Did you check the composition of your target? Note that even in the nitride films the B content is still much higher than it should be.

3. The authors claim that the peak in deposition rate at Rn=0.5 is due to re-sputtering of Al atoms. However, unlike your ref. 20, there is no Al deficient in your alloy film. Therefore there is no apparent re-sputtering of Al in your film and this reason does not make sense.

4. P6, final line.
"bombardment by energetic discharge species led to a relatively strong re-sputtering effect", please provide some reference for this statement.

5. Can you provide more discussion regarding the tribological properties of the films? Particularly why the friction coefficient is so low relative to other multi-element nitride films.

Additions of the editor:
-the accuracy of the method of Scherrer to determine the crystallite size is only about 10%. Consequently, the results of this technique cannot be presented with more than two digits. Values in the manuscript should be rounded off. Please, note that "crystallite" is a better term than "grain".
-The research highlights should be appropriate for stand-alone reading so every symbol should be explicitly defined.
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ziyeweng

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有机会

robot121(金币+1): 2011-02-07 09:37:38
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Originally posted by robot121 at 2011-02-07 08:33:50:
虫友们,帮忙看看审稿人的意见,看看是否有机会中哦!谢谢!
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The paper reports the structure and properties of (AlCrMnMoNiZrB0.1)Nx coatings. These multielement coatings are ...

你论文语法错的很多,好好修改。
最主要是你的一个系数问题,这个问题要回答清楚。
2楼2011-02-07 08:43:09
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zhaojf8722

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robot121(金币+1): 2011-02-07 09:37:44
有机会
3楼2011-02-07 08:51:54
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pepperp

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robot121(金币+1): 2011-02-07 09:37:48
只有让修改就有很大的机会
4楼2011-02-07 09:32:37
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skyhawk006

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只要让你修就有机会,无论是大修还是小修
5楼2011-02-07 11:22:25
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starared

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很有机会,但必须认真修改!
6楼2011-02-07 11:40:29
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yingying1588

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按要求改,有机会的。
7楼2011-02-07 11:49:12
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wstf

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春节愉快!
8楼2011-02-07 12:27:15
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有戏啊
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wguo

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这就是让你修改啊。

只要submission还挂在审稿系统里,就还有机会。
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Originally posted by robot121 at 2011-02-07 08:33:50:
虫友们,帮忙看看审稿人的意见,看看是否有机会中哦!谢谢!
Reviewers' comments:


The paper reports the structure and properties of (AlCrMnMoNiZrB0.1)Nx coatings. These multielement coatings are ...

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mlanqiang

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机会很大啊。
11楼2011-02-08 16:29:36
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