1楼: Originally posted by 裂缝中di阳光 at 2016-04-24 14:34:36
Even in a year notable for the number of major hurricanes that occurred, Katrina stood out.Though it was only category 4 at landfall and weakened quickly thereafter.
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3楼: Originally posted by sqlg888 at 2016-04-24 17:27:24
在一年内发生飓风数量令人瞩目，卡特里娜飓风还是独占鳌头，虽然它登陆级别只有4级，其后迅速减弱。（然而造成的损失。。。。。。。。）

这句话不完整。

4楼: Originally posted by 裂缝中di阳光 at 2016-04-24 21:57:41
确实不完整，Hurricanes and Coastal Vulnerability  翻译成飓风和沿海脆弱性 是不是感觉怪怪的~ 这是刚翻译的段落的标题~
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6楼: Originally posted by sqlg888 at 2016-04-25 10:02:55
Hurricanes and Coastal Vulnerability _____刚好是卡特里娜飓风形成的破坏给人们的启迪，很好，飓风和沿海脆弱性再加点词进去，就好了...

8楼: Originally posted by whutwuting at 2016-04-25 16:49:28
even in a year notable for the number of major hurricames that occur这句话中的notable为什么单独放在前面？