Thank you for submitting your manuscript to xxxxx. After careful evaluation, while I find the topic of the manuscript appropriate for the journal I regret to inform you that the level of English throughout your manuscript does not meet the journal's required standard, and I must therefore reject it.

For help with English language usage and quality, we strongly recommend you consult a professional language editing service. Please visit our Customer Service Site for more information about Elsevier's language editing services: https://webshop.elsevier.com/languageservices.

We appreciate you submitting your manuscript to xxxxx and thank you for giving us the opportunity to consider your work. We hope that you re-submit after English editing.

编辑当时的回复，然后就送去Elsevier润色了，但感觉润色并没有整体提高写作水平，只修改了以下三点：

1. 把我当时觉得可以用一般现在时表达的一般性result，改成了过去式
2. 加了一些定冠词the
3. 替换部分用词，且很多都是重复的替换

而对于句子的连接，以及母语者的表达习惯方面，完全没有任何改动，Elsevier的润色都是这样吗，这样是合理的吗？投过去担心仍然会因为语言问题被拒。 返回小木虫查看更多