如题，第一次投稿，奈何英文不行，审稿人让改句子，列出了几个句子让修改，水平有限，请大神帮忙看看，感激不尽。
1)        English should be totally revised, below some sentences :
… SiO2@PDA microspheres are with good sphericity…
… SiO2@PDA microspheres formed an ordered arrangement surface of polyester fabrics by VSDM and appeared bright and vivid structural colors under the visible light…
… in this study SiO2@PDA microspheres with a core-shell structure were prepared by the oxidative self-polymerization reaction of dopamine and then constructed photonic crystals structural colors with tunable and bright on the surface of the white polyester fabric by vertical deposition self-assembly method…
… then, the mixed solution was magnetic stirring for 20 hours…
… it can be seen that their particle size distributions where the curves of SiO2 and SiO2@PDA microspheres almost coincide and the shape of the peaks were narrow and sharp, which indicates great monodispersity…
… the SiO2@PDA microspheres structural colors on the surface of white polyester fabrics after VDSM was brighter and more vivid, which is because SiO2@PDA microspheres form a comparative ordered photonic crystals structure driven by capillary forces…
… in this study the SiO2@PDA microspheres of different particles sizes to prepared different hues of the structural colors fabrics have been presented in Fig.4…
… in the range 0-75° viewing angle, the structural color fabrics tend blue-shifted…
这些句子本就是靠机器翻译加自己模仿，所以，我真的不知道怎么修改，请大神给些建议。 返回小木虫查看更多