投稿的一篇综述论文返修，有一个审稿人提出：I strongly recommend a major rewrite to incorporate a smooth flow of ideas and concepts in to one another, for ease of readability. A good review paper is akin to a good knowledge which takes the reader through the whole text right up to the conclusions section while maintaining their interest.

这一句话是啥意思。感觉这个意见不好改啊，没有提具体的问题，感觉完全无从下手。。。

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