其中一条意见是：

Results and discussion

Discussion was very general in nature. Needs to be carried in detail pertaining to the current work.


感觉说的很笼统，针对这个该如何修改啊？或者从哪方面修改？我做的是金属的组织和力学性能方面的。

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