历时四个半月，小修意见回来，

Reviewer: 1

Comments to the Author
Improve the language please.

Reviewer: 2

Comments to the Author
Some sentences can be simplified using the right linking words. Formality is better to be improved, such as, some titles and subtitles.
两个审稿人给的意见，这样需要不需要找人润色一下呢？

其中编辑的几句话不是很明白
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第一段，是不是说提交修改稿时，还要给他他们编辑部发一封邮件？
第二段应该是说改论文有没有再其他地方发表，没有在其他地方发表过，应该怎么给他回复呢？
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