回复审稿人意见一般用一般现在时和现在完成时，描述修改内容用被动语态，类似于这样的：
We are very sorry for our negligence of ……...
We are very sorry for our incorrect writing ……...
It is really true as Reviewer suggested that……
We have made correction according to the Reviewer’s comments.
We have re-written this part according to the Reviewer’s suggestion
As Reviewer suggested that……
Considering the Reviewer’s suggestion, we have ……，

你们实验室应该有些回复comments的例子吧，建议好好读一读。
大概看了下，有些回复实在是...
比如comment 5：因为我看到的文章选择了这个condition，所以我也选了。 确定这是个科学的回复？
再比如comment 4，可以考虑写的稍微具体点，比如新增加了什么，而不是仅仅modify一笔带过。