Dear Prof. Haiyun Jin,

The reviewer has commented on your above paper and indicated that it is acceptable for publication with some corrections.

I invite you to revise and resubmit your manuscript carefully addressing the issues raised in the reviewer's comments (included below).

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a) outline each change made (point by point) as raised in the reviewer comments

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Pietro Vincenzini
General Editor
Ceramics International

Reviewer's comments:


Reviewer #2: Your paper is interesting but it needs some corrections:
-page 1 Abstract line 28 ...confirmed the decay...
-page 2 line 20 ...subsequently to yield ceramics sensitive to crack. ; line 56 ...materials microstructure.
-page 3 line 14 ...model with the finite...; line 42 ...work were employed...
-page 4 line 25 The word nurdensome is not clear?
-page 5 line 20 ...gradual degradation of...; line 33 ...crack probably emerges on ...; line 44 ... also play the role...
-page 6 line 17 the precision concerning the width of cracks is excessive; line 53 Large number of papers on investigation of thermal...
-page 7 line 20 ...novel model is...
-page 9 line 58 ...and thus has...
-page 10 line 3 ...températures evolution when...; line 56 ...crack propagation increases...
-page 11 line 6 This implyes that...; line 12 ... crack propagation increases as...;line 36 ...with the decrease of porosity...
-page 13 line 3 as a increases. As b increases, ....; line 14 ... the pores which became...; line 28 ...was to provide a ...; line 31 ...behavior in porous materials...; line 42 and bifurcation in... ; line 45... comparison of the obtained...; line 48 ...and it matched well....; line 50 approach which yieded...; line 56 ..; the model could...

Figure captions Fig. 3, 4 and 9 remove The (Boundary, Distributions, Crack propagation°

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