原来你是河北邯郸的呀 哈哈

额 你这是要口头介绍 还是要书面的？ 如果是口语那就没关系 不过书面的话这个全文语法问题不是一般的多 要改还不如重写 大学四六级不考作文么

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5楼: Originally posted by monatelee at 2015-07-19 00:44:07
口头的，四六级考作文，虽然都过了，但作文分比较低。虽然是口头的，也希望大神指点指点语法错误，总归是有益的
...

Hello, my name is ___

  It's certainly been a pleasure meeting you all here

  My hometown is Handan, a city __方向__ of Beijing, a city rich in history as it was once the capital of Zhao, one of seven Waring States some 260 years before Christ
  (秦始皇之前诸候纷纷自称为王, 王国 = kingdom)

  (下两句话不需改)

  The Internet of Things refers to a soon-to-be fact of life whereby web-enabled "smart" appliances routinely talk to one another

    (下一句话不需改)  ( ... = 不需改)

  ... I'm a funny girl
  
  I live by the motto "..." so I work very hard in college...

  I learned well and won Second Prize when the national University Students "Challenge Cup" contest was held at my school.

  My goal is becoming a graduate student in one of China's prestigious universities

  I enjoy traveling in my spare time...

  However, this is my first time to southern China, specifically Hangzhou...

  I like being with friends and reminiscing our happy and sad moments together.

  My roommates are always surprised how many friends say "Hello" to me while we wall through campus

  I hope to be fast friends with all of you


  That’s all, thank you very much
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