各位，请帮忙指出这两个句子的所有语法错误并修改，谢谢了！我会给奖励的哦！
The average sensitivities of other sensors , such as holy fiber with a small air hole in core is around 2728 nm/RIU in the range of 1.33-1.41, holy fiber with analyte-filled core is around 2775 nm/RIU in the range of 1.33-1.42, multi-core holey fiber is around 2929.39 nm/RIU in the range of 1.33-1.42, polished multimode fiber SMF is around 956 nm/RIU in the range of 1.328-1.345, tilted grating in SMF is around 454 nm/RIU in the range of 1.4211-1.4499, which are all smaller than our proposed one. The FOM for these two modes can be reached 949.8 and 791.4 when na is 1.45, which are higher than the values 73 in Ref.[6] and 216 in Ref.[21].
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The average sensitivities of other sensors (in Fig ) are all smaller than our proposed one. The FOM for these two modes can be reached 949.8 and 791.4 when na is 1.45, which are higher than the values 73 in Ref.[6] and 216 in Ref.[21]，