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请各位高手帮忙检查下下面的语句有没有语法错误
The more significant, the energy transfer between Tm3+ and Er3+ is enhanced by suppression of the red upconversion emission of Er3+, thus the blue upconversion emission from Tm3+ is considerably improved in the inverse opals.
是不是不能使用the more significant
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应该是 “more significantly”。
the more,,, the more 应该成对出现
The more significant不合适，此处不应该用形容词形式，应为副词形式。
“， thus”好像没有单独一句这么用，感觉直接用“，so”或者“and thus”较好。请参考
transfer应改为transfers，前面省略了which
上面的朋友都说的差不多了，两个错误：状语应该用More significantly； thus不引导结果状语从句，应该改为so，或者另起一句。
改成More significantly, the energy transfer between Tm3+ and Er3 is enhanced by suppression of the red upconversion emission of Er3+, so the blue upconversion emission from Tm3+ is considerably improved in the inverse opals.
transfer 在这里应该是名词，energy transfer是名词词组，做主语。这个不用改
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