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                                  第一讲

引发激烈讨论，热门话题，激烈争论，广泛关注       
heated, hot, long-running, controversial, hotly-debated
a matter of (global )concern, (burning, pressing, thorny)issue, controversy, subject, focus, topic. be put on the agenda
trigger, spark, arouse
intense, fierce, contentious/ debate, discussion, argument
arouse people’s wide concern/ / wide public concern/curiosity/attention,
make people worried
become public focus/ the focus of the society

more and more people---an increasing number of people
more and more useful---increasingly useful
人---事物
More and more people waste ---The growing rate of waste have people calling it an epidemic
a lot of ---a considerable number of/ massive/
different people have different ideas towards it----people’s ideas towards it differ from one to another. .,      views on this issue vary greatly.
try to—attempt to, intend to
think – argue, claim , deem , insist
if – provided that, assuming that, supposing that


一 写作常用关键词句：

1．        认为，断言：think, believe, argue, hold, contend, state, claim, suppose, advocate, assume, point out, point to, allege, assert
    personally, as for me, as far as I am concerned, for my part
2．        许多：a large number of, a large amount of, a considerable number of, a host of, dozens of, scores of, the bulk of, a majority of 大部分的，a minority of小部分的
3．        如今、目前：in contemporary society, nowadays, at present, recently, currently, in recent decades
4．        越来越：increasing, growing
5．        重要，必要，肯定主导，关键，根本, 意义重大：important, necessary, essential, vital, crucial, influential, overwhelming, primary, overriding, principal，fundamental, elementary, cardinal, significant, indispensable, dominant, key, leading, prominent, decisive, major, gist, crux关键，症结所在
6．        关注、重视、强调、优先考虑、把…放首要位置：highlight, pay attention to, attract…, raise…concern, arouse…  concern, call for…concern, attach importance to, give priority to, lay emphasis/stress on
7．        不予重视、忽视、低估、次要：downplay, overlook, ignore, neglect, underestimate,       secondary in importance
8．        赞成、支持：applaud, favor, advocate, in favor of, be side with, in agreement with, go for, vote, proponent支持者
9．        反对：oppose, protest, frown皱眉，object to, go against, disagree with, opponent反对者
10．        一致意见：consensus, it is universally acknowledged that…, it is generally accepted
11．        有争议的问题、热点问题、棘手的问题、关注的问题：a controversial issue, a heated topic, a burning problem, a thorny issue, a matter of concern, a subject of fierce debate
12．        归因于，源自于：ascribe to, attribute to, result from, is associated with, arise from, derive from, stem from, originate from (in), grow form, a source of
13．        因为，由于：by virtue of, in light of, due to, thanks to, owing to, because of, be responsible for
14．        导致、造成：contribute to, lead to, result in, bring about, create, give rise to, trigger, ignite, cause, generate, promote, breed, induce
15．        往往，表趋势：tend to, be prone to, be inclined to, have a tendency to
16．        可能：may, perhaps, be likely to, possibly, it is very likely that…, it is predicted that…预测
17．        发生，出现，产生：take place, occur, arise, bring about, create, cause, emerge, turn out, work out
18．        常常：often, frequently, more often than not
19．        偶尔：occasionally, sometimes, once in a while, on some occasions
20．        有…影响：exert …effects on, have an effect/ impact/ influence on
21．        不管，尽管：no matter…, regardless of, despite, in spite of
22．        塑造、培养：cultivate, develop, foster, mould, shape, build
23．        增强：promote, strengthen, enhance, intensify, magnify, amplify
24．        接触到：expose…to, have/ get access to
25．        能给，能使，能让：give, let, make, offer, promise, bring, provide, allow, render, ensure, equip…with, furnish…with, encourage, enable sb. to do sth.   liberate/ free/ release sb. from..
26．        优点、优势：pro, merit, strength, advantage, benefit, positive
27．        缺点、弱势：con, fault, flaw, weakness, downside, drawback, disadvantage, negative
28．        如果、假设：imagine that, provided that, suppose that, on condition that
29．        破坏、损害、有害：destroy, damage, spoil, ruin, undermine, endanger, jeopardize, impair, temper, do harm to , be detrimental to, be hazardous,
30．        阻碍，妨碍：hinder, hamper, block, keep…from, obstacle to, barrier to,
31．        构成潜在威胁/危害：pose potential threat/ danger/ risk to
32．        有益，有助于：be beneficial/ instrumental/ helpful/ conducive/ favorable/ optimal, facilitate
33．        伴随：along with, together with, be accompanied by
34．        关于：in terms of, with regards to, as to
35．        呈现，展现，描述：show, display, illustrate, exhibit, describe, depict, demonstrate, unfold, point to the fact that…
36．        不可否认：there is no denying that…, it is an undeniable fact that…
37．        毫无疑问：it is no doubt that…, admittedly
38．        普遍，流行，受欢迎：prevalent, prevail, enjoy/ gain popularity
39．        当谈到，谈及：when it comes to…,
40．        让我/我们想到：it occurs to me/ us that…
41．        目睹、见证：The 20th century witnessed/ saw that…
42．        明显,突出的(adj): conspicuous/ striking /prominent /eminent/ noticeable/remarkable/ obvious/ apparent/ evident/ significant
43．        很大地，非常地（表示程度）：significantly, considerably, surprisingly, greatly, highly, hugely, largely, tremendously, enormously, overwhelmingly, remarkably, strikingly, substantially, essentially, vastly, entirely, badly,
44．        合理的，可行的，恰当的：reasonable, rational, sensible, appropriate, proper, sound, plausible貌似合理的，
45．        证明，证实： confirm, prove, justify, verify,
46．        反驳：protest, refute
47．        怀疑，质疑：doubt, doubtful, suspect, be suspicious of, skeptic, be skeptical of
（这类词语还可参照我的阅读分类词汇）

二 Sentence and words
1.        rich – 大部分是复合句,有分词结构.
2.        high-level – 定语从句,强调句,倒装句,虚拟语气
3.        词语可换说法，即便是名词也可换说法。这样可使得文章的词语rich，多变化。
改写：大学旨在培养未来人才。
The university aims to cultivate talents for the future.
The university, as a school of higher education(作插入语来解释), aims to cultivate( build/ foster/ shape) talents (elites精英/ the minds思想指代有头脑的人/ ) (who are furnished with professional skills)for the future.

改写：这种犯罪行为会危害社会..
Such (offense/ misconduct/ delinquency/ delinquent behavior/criminal behavior) (damages/ undermines/ endangers/ is detrimental to) social community.

改写：这会严重影响学习.
It will adversely/ severely affect our academic performance.


写出画线的同义词

政府应该采取措施来解决这个问题
The government should take measures to solve the complicated problem.

The government (Our country / nation / The department concerned / The administration / The authorities) should take (adopt/ optimize) related (relevant / pertinent 相关的/ corresponding相应的 / effective / feasible / applicable/ timely) measures (campaign/ countermeasures / steps / actions) to solve (resolve/ address/ render/ adjust/ regulate/ ) the complicated (complex / thorny / perplexing / vexing) problem (issue / matter).

4. 思维换说法
心理健康对于大学生来说很重要
Mental health is very important to college students.
让步加反说
(While it may be true that education for knowledge and skills is the key of college education), mental health education is (should be/ can be / deserves/ requires) also very (greatly/ hugely/ significantly/ strikingly) important// (not be downplayed/ overlooked/ ignored/ underestimated/ not less important/ secondary in importance) to college students (the young people/ those who are in pursuit of higher education).

让步，转折，加入插入语置中
各种技术发明使我们的时间更少了。
(Once upon a time, technology, we thought, would make our lives easier), but instead of freeing us, inventions eats further into our time.

5. 增加句子字数
(There is no denying fact that / It is an undeniable fact that / it is widely accepted that) the (only / sole / major / primary / common) task of (university / young / our) students is to acquire (fully / as abundant as possible) the (useful / professional / helpful / practical) knowledge and skills (that are essential to their future career).

随着科技的发展，数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如 …
With the development of technology, digital products have been using widely. For example…
合并句子，名词替代动词，形容词或副词。
Developments/ Advancement/ Breakthroughs/ Innovations in technology (With the development of technology) greatly promote( help/ facilitate/ contribute to/ give rise to/ magnify/ amplify/ intensify) the use of digital products in almost all areas in our social community, with (for example) a wide range of products (objects/ devices/ gauges) like cell phones, digital cameras, and teleconference facilities.

6. 以事物开头句子
互联网使我们很容易接触到全世界最新的资讯.
The Internet enables us to have easy access to the latest information worldwide.
比较：我们可以上网获取信息。
We can use the Internet to get information.

练习：
人们可以坐车自由出行。
We can go out to travel freely.
比较：
汽车，在很大程度上，使人们可以自由出行。
The automobile, to a great extent, promises people high level of personal mobility/ free travel.



分析范文（网络资源）。批判式取长补短，学改写
How to improve student's mental health
　　1、 大学生的心理健康十分重要   2、 因此，学校可以......  3、 我们自己应当......
　　Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains.
　　Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. What's more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. (学校)
　　From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.


                                       第二讲

学写开头
两三句话开头

不要落入提纲圈套，直接翻译中文
不要with the development of…
不要 nowadays, more and more people…

明确作文话题的类别，常见的有：
智力教育类
科技类
环境类
文化传统类
社会经济类
道德权利犯罪类
心理情感类

就以上常见类别准备相应词汇。写开头时以该类别为引子下定义，再转折要讨论的问题。


随着科技的发展，数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如 …
With the development of technology, digital products have been using widely. For example…
合并句子，名词替代动词，形容词或副词。
Developments/ Advancement/ Breakthroughs/ Innovations in technology (With the development of technology) greatly promote( help/ facilitate/ contribute to/ give rise to/ magnify/ amplify/ intensify) the use of digital products in almost all areas in our social community, with (for example) a wide range of products (objects/ devices/ gauges) like cell phones, digital cameras, and teleconference facilities.

方法：下定义+ 转折（引出话题）+点题/小总结
第一句：主谓宾结构 n（事物/ 不用人）+ v.+ n.
第二句：However, …（反说）+ 例子（分词句/定语从句/伴随的with+名词）
第三句：点题/小总结

大学生的心理健康十分重要  （教育话题）

Education is supposed to be associated with the teaching and learning of professional knowledge and skills. However, mental health education should not be taken as secondary in importance for the sound development of a young man, when we read news reports on some surprisingly extreme cases of suicide, and even murder on campus. The young learners, while committing to study, are faced with a fragile mental health problem.


现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日  （文化传统话题）
China boasts its long history of festival culture and harbors a significantly distinctive customs. Less happily, young people nowadays tend to shift their focus from the traditional festivals to western ones, like Christmas and Valentine’s Day in particular, which have gained increase popularity year after year. The preservation of Chinese traditional festivals, thus, is becoming a national concern.

练习：目前盗版的现象比较严重
Words to help:
盗版：piracy (n.)
盗版产品：pirated products
知识产权：intellectual property rights
侵犯版权：infringe sb’s copyright; copyright infringement

Intellectual property rights is legally protected to the owners, but few people seems quite sure to be dedicated to the idea of buying copyright products. This misconduct leads to a surprisingly outbreak/ explosion/ epidemic of pirated products, ranging from hi-tech devices, such as cell phone and computer software, to creative cultural products, CDs of movies and paper books and the like. Copyright infringement thus greatly damages the order of market, making people worried.

练习：阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要
Classic books preserve ‘a window’ into the essence of history, culture and philosophy./ preserve ‘a platform’ for people to talk with the great minds of history, culture and philosophy. Unhappily, most young people tend to welcome/ harbor a flood of information/ information explosion pouring in from every corner of the world, rather than dedicating themselves to read a book of classics in the excuse of time-stressed. Some schools of higher education seem to have put the classics reading out of academic requirements.

或：
      让步+ 反说 （引出话题）+点题/小总结

(While it may be true that education for knowledge and skills is the key of college education), mental health education is (should be/ can be / deserves/ requires) also very (greatly/ hugely/ significantly/ strikingly) important// (not be downplayed/ overlooked/ ignored/ underestimated/ not less important/ secondary in importance) to college students (the young people/ those who are in pursuit of higher education).

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