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peixl999

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[求助] 麻烦帮我看下这个句子语法有没有问题,谢谢!已有2人参与

大家好;
    我写的文章中的一个句子,感觉有问题,所以请教大家。
    句子如下:In the study, highly cross-linked polyimide gels were prepared through the hydrolysis and condensation reactions of trimethoxysilane, which was incorporated on every repeating units of polyimide as side groups. (一些单词的意思如下:polyimide 聚酰亚胺;gel  凝胶;hydrolysis 水解;condensation 缩合;trimethoxysilane 三甲氧基硅烷;repeating unit 重复单元;)
       我这个定语从句是修饰trimethoxysilane的,这个句子是不是应该改成:In the study, highly cross-linked polyimide gels were prepared from trimethoxysilane, which was incorporated on every repeating units of polyimide as side groups and can hydrolyze and condense one another.

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peixl999: 金币+5, 有帮助 2014-07-03 17:21:09
In the study, highly cross-linked polyimide gels were prepared from trimethoxysilane incorporated on every repeating units of polyimide as side groups,which can hydrolyze and condense one another.
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感觉你的定语从句结构没有错,但你想用什么来修饰trimethoxysilane,就要依你的专业知识和想法来定了。外行就没办法建议了。
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