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General remarks:
The manuscript including figures including references is not at all checked and cannot be published in the current form

Technical devices give always (xx type, xx manufacturer, xx country)

If these corrections are made, a publication is acceptable
P = page L = line

P1 L50: high modulus.which modulus?

P3 L34: AG-10TA give manufacturer etc.

P5 L15: Tungsten powder 0.6-0.9 my-m include particle size (?) etc.!

P6L15: write Vickers! (3 different spellings in manuscript!)

References:
ALL References must be carefully checked, a lot of errors are included,
Even the name of our former Assoc. editor IJRMHM is mutilated! [1]
Please, adapt References according to the Guide for Authors of IJRMHM:

http://www.elsevier.com/locate/IJRMHM

Table 1:
Remove column "W" no further information! Explain symbols!


Figure 1: indicate diffraction peaks! Remove tickmarks on abscissa top line!

Figure 2: check tickmarks on both axes! 5 minor marks every 5 units??

Figure 4: not good readable, include arrows for better assignation graph-ordinate axis; meaning of the boxes unclear? Write "Vickers" instead of "Vikers"

If you give arithmetic mean and standard deviation, please, also add the number of measurements.

If the English of this manuscript is not improved it will be rejected!
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