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ming520817

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[求助] 求组织英语语句啊,多谢 已有1人参与

The amount of CH4 is increasing with the cycle number, the main reason is the increase of the pressure-drop. From the perspectives of thermodynamics and kinetics, the increase of pressure-drop, that is, the rise of the reaction pressure can promote reaction (8), which is a volume reducing reaction.

压力损失增大,即反应压力增大能促进反应(8),这个“即”应该怎么组织呢,总感觉这么写有问题啊,多谢。
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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
可以用 i.e., 代替 that is。

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第一句有点问题。要么写成两句话,要么在the main reason is 前面加一个and,或者将其改成 which is caused by。另外,is increasing的用法是错的,用increases 就可以了。

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3楼: Originally posted by brucefan at 2014-06-28 16:55:43
第一句有点问题。要么写成两句话,要么在the main reason is 前面加一个and,或者将其改成 which is caused by。另外,is increasing的用法是错的,用increases 就可以了。
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那个that is 那句怎么改呢?多谢
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ming520817: 金币+5 2014-07-01 14:43:38
手机打字不方便,换电脑打。既然你还不明白,那我就整段修改一下吧,供你参考。
The amount of CH4 increases with the number of cycles due to an increase of the pressure-drop. From the perspectives of thermodynamics and kinetics, the increase of pressure-drop, or equivalently, the rise of the reaction pressure can promote reaction (8), which is a volume reducing reaction.
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