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       没发过文章的人,把发文章想的很高深。正在写文章的人,愁肠百结,很是痛苦。而发过文章的人最知写文章时的不易,一改再改,不知多少遍,终成初稿。然而在投稿后,大多数人还会面临revise或者reject。也许审稿人和编辑让你revise不止一次,也许审稿人reject的意见令你备受打击。但不管是怎样的revise和reject,优秀的或者“优秀的”审稿人给出他们中肯客观的、亦或是可能让你一时摸不着头脑的意见和评价,加上你自己的解读和努力改进,你的文章终会受益,提高不止一个档次,进而被杂志接收。
       大部分的审稿都是peer-review,很多审稿人都是你所在的研究领域里的大牛。审稿人的意见有的是针对文章的语言,有的针对文章的逻辑,也有的针对方法的严谨性,不一而足。虽然审稿意见是针对具体的一篇文章而言,但对于同行或者初入门的人仍然有很大的参考价值。因此,本版现对“审稿意见”(限外文)进行有奖征集活动。

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okitworks: 回帖置顶 2012-11-29 19:22:37
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10楼: Originally posted by 永远不知道 at 2012-11-29 19:18:18
我表示没有看懂啊。。。。

就是你投稿时,审稿人针对你的文章提出的审稿意见哈~
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zhtear99: 金币+5, 嘿嘿,第一个哦,非常感谢lcg2009版主。如若能完善些,再BB奖励哈~ 2012-11-29 20:01:56
zhtear99: 回帖置顶 2012-11-30 11:45:40
1) It is better to add some new references, which can make reviewer to know the recent research and the innovations.
2) the innovations should be described clearly.
3) The English should be polished by a native English speaking person.
发一个给大家参考,献丑了
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zhtear99: 金币+7, 感谢提供审稿意见~ 看来你文章写的还不错,审稿人只是建议小修一下,呵呵~ 2012-11-29 23:11:01
zhtear99: 回帖置顶 2012-11-30 11:45:49
The authors complemented their manuscript and provided an adequate justification of the results obtained in the paper in response to the reviewer comments. I believe the revised version can be accepted for publication after the following minor revisions:

1.        A clear presentation of the novelty of the paper in the introduction, especially in relation to references 33 and 34.

2.        Determination of the amount (%) of D-units in the PLA chain. The D- and L-content are fundamental for the crystallization behavior of PLA and absolutely necessary in a publication like the present one.
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zhtear99: 金币+8, 谢谢ok版来稿,哈哈~ 2012-11-30 17:26:43
okitworks: 回帖置顶 2012-11-30 17:34:56
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引用回帖:
Associate Editor (Remarks for the Author):

All three reviewers are positive to the paper, but they also raised some meaningful comments. The authors are suggested to address them in detail.


Reviewer #1 (Remarks for the Author):

This paper mainly concerns the application of Paper's Title. This research is of great significance in both theory and application. The contents and outcomes of this paper are suitable for the XXX journal.

The reviewer has several revision suggestions about this paper as follows:
(1) Based on Fig.3 and Fig.4, the reviewer fail to find serious noise in the raw signal, so the reviewer think the proposed filter method XXX may not be necessary for Damage identification and localization. So the reviewer suggest the authors compare the identification and localization outcomes based on filter signal and that based on the raw signal.

(2) The reviewer also thinks that too much concentration is given to the wavelet transform; instead, the concentration should be given equally to the XXX.



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zhtear99: 回帖置顶 2012-12-01 10:42:25
zhtear99: 金币+10, 感谢顾问童鞋提供的审稿意见,非常完整,还有自己的评价,很棒~ 2012-12-01 13:01:29
zhtear99: 金币+10, 两份审稿意见,所以双份奖励~ 2012-12-01 13:02:08
研究方向:MEMS(microelectro-mechanical systems)
审稿意见:如下所列
个人感想:第二个reviewer看似有点为难我们,提了很多比较刁难人的问题,但是真的很有帮助,尤其是对于如何在已经有了好的idea的情况下,怎么事半功倍证明这个idea漂亮。后来我们回复之后,这个reviewer还又来了一个问题,所以还有第二次答复。最终reviewer可能比较满意吧,给我们文章打分比较高,最后被收到了杂志的年度highlight里面(显摆一下,只有3%的文章被收录了


Referee report

First referee's report

The concept is very interesting. The manuscript is very well written. The conclusions are supported by experimental data. Of course a good job!

Second referee's report

This work presents a new exciting idea to develop a XXX which has good potential. Authors have however failed to demonstrate clearly the benefits of their device. In Figure 7 the slope of the straight heated and XXX heated curve look very similar except for probably initial 2-3 secs. The two cooling mechanisms look to saturate at two different temperatures. It means that the thermal resistances of the two systems are different and are hence not completely comparable. The absolute difference in final temperature is of little consequence as a different heat-sink for the straight cooled device can reach the similar final temperature with a similar time delay. The benefit of the presented device is that it will allow any MEMS device to reach its final operating temperature quickly with minimal energy loss and then maintain the operating temperature. So it is recommended that the authors comment of the initial slope of the two curves (or compare the energy lost in reaching the final state) and compare their device with respect to the straight cooled device. Authors can also consider devicing an experiment in which both the systems reach the similar final temperature and demonstrate the benefit of the XXX.

Authors are also recommended to discuss the temperature jump in initial 2-3 seconds for the no heatsink and the XXX case.

The authors have presented a very good overview of the existing technology. The applicability of this technology, however, depends on availability of different XXXX. Authors are recommended to present a few exemplary XXXX’s to show that this technology can be tuned for different applications requiring different turn on temperatures.

The authors are requested to present a labeled cross section schematic of the displacement experiment i.e. figure 2 a.

5 mm droplet is sometimes too large for many MEMS applications. Also to achieve a better local thermal control the authors would like to design the heating array with as small a droplet as possible. Therefore the authors are recommended to discuss the effect of droplet miniaturization on the maximum displacement that can be achieved reversibly while considering the increasing effect of surface tension.

The device schematic as shown has XXXX domes trapped in holes on copper plate. It is stated that the XXXX wets copper in its molten state. Then during operation of the device when the XXXX is in liquid phase how do the authors prevent the droplets to spread and wet the whole copper surface? Even if the wetting is slow, it will affect the long term operation of the device.
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zhtear99: 金币+18, 感谢你和大家分享这些,很受教也很有指导意义~ 2012-12-01 13:03:44
zhtear99: 回帖置顶 2012-12-01 13:04:02
投稿和审稿的一些片段想法

1. 当一篇文章被退稿的时候,审稿人提了一堆意见,叫补这个实验那个实验。可以说,有水平的投稿人就象高中老师一样,能够“猜题”,知道什么东西“在考纲范围之内”,什么东西不需要,预先把审稿人要做的实验做好,加到文章里去。可以说,很多文章都处在临界点上,正好缺这些数据就是打不中,而就是加这点数据正好“及格”了!知道这些道理后,一个有用的方法是请实验室其他真正能够直言的、有经验的同仁提尖锐意见。导师在这里也起到很重要作用。

2. 投稿的奥妙,用田忌赛马的语言来说,就是:如果用下等马去和别人的上等马去较量,必然打不过人家。曾经一个学术大师告诉我,经验规则是投稿者自己判断文章的水平,要使自己的文章比目标杂志平均水平高一点才能确保命中率。而“投稿者自己判断文章的水平”是一门学问,有的人就是能够预测未来,知道自己文章的命运。为什么文章命中那么重要呢?有个单词叫credibility,意思是说如果自己都不知道自己的文章应该投什么杂志,投文章老是退稿,那么编辑又怎么能把投稿者当一回事呢?对别人的工作要客观,对自己的工作要客观。很多指导写作的理论书都说,写文章的时候,作者必须“往后退几步”,冷静地判断自己科研工作的意义和价值,而不能产生“晕轮效应”。

3. 大学里,前十几名同学都可以拿A,有的同学不用考试就知道他稳拿第一名了,他却还开夜车,搞得周围的人很紧张。在撰写科研论文的时候也是这样,如果你的目标杂志只是普通杂志,并且你文章的内容远远超过“及格”标准了,那么就是要走“保守主义”路线,也就是说要避免奇谈怪论,避免oversell和controversial的东西。审稿人的审美观是不一样的。如果你炒作概念,运气好也许能中Nature。但是如果你已经确保能中普通杂志却还是炒作概念,那也许连普通杂志都中不了!

4. 学术论文不是新闻报道。很多两页快报放两张电子显微镜照片,说合成出吸引眼球的纳米材料,效果其好无比。但是为什么效果其好无比呢?文章里没有说,而是说“后续研究正在进行中”,结果过了几年,没有看到什么“后续报道”。这样的文章,随着时间的推移,越来越难被好杂志的审稿人接受了。

5. 追求的是实实在在的东西。在乎的不是“PNAS, to be submitted”,而是“Catalysis Letters, published”。雷声大、雨点小就好比台湾政客,选举的时候空头支票开了很多,当选后没有一件事情办成的。必须要有真抓实干的精神,饭要一口一口吃,事情要一件一件做,文章要一篇一篇发。
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zhtear99: 回帖置顶 2012-12-05 19:48:11
研究方向:计算机辅助药物设计
投稿杂志名称:International Journal of Molecular Sciences
审稿意见:
Reviewer 1#
1) This paper is well organized and of interest in the field, but some points must be clarified and discussed before it can be suitable of publication.
2) On page 3, line 113: "required empirical potential energy function" must be substituted with "force field parameters" since the term is wrong.
A question on page 4 paragraph lines 118-121: How can the authors be sure that the most conformational analysis been made on each of these tow compounds? This point of course is crucial for a correct alignment and thus further analysis.
3) On page 7, another perplexity: How can the authors be sure that the crystallized water are indeed structural for the template protein too? Are there any experimental evidence? I suggest to repeat the docking calculations also in absence of water inside the cleft and tentatively compare the results obtained. This point of is crucial since all the discussion about the molecular interactions is linked to structural water playing a fundamental role in stabilization.
4) On page 11, figure 5: line 322-323: "tubes" instead of "ball and stick".

Reviewer 1#
Considering the situation that no X-ray structure of human proteasome exists, making good models of the enzyme as inhibitor-bound form help researchers conduct SAR study efficiently. The computational studies in this manuscript almost meet the demand. However, both compounds dealt with in this manuscript are covalent inhibitors. The reviewer would like the authors to state any good reason why only non-covalent interactions were considered in the calculations. Especially, TBA is believed to make reversible borate adduct form to display proteasome-inhibitory activity, and the bound structure should be more suitable to evaluate results from SAR studies on the compounds of this class. Recalculations is requested if needed.
On the top of that, the following should be considered.
Line 68: What abbreviation MM means (multiple myeloma) should be indicated.
Line 101: "selected considered having a similar range" is grammatically incorrect.
Line 227: change energy to energetically
throuout: Usually, "big" is not used scientific articles like this. Change to large, bulky or other appropriate words.
个人感想:两个审稿人给的意见都很好。两位审稿人比我还细心,我没检查出来的明显错误被他们看出来了(囧ing),而且第二个审稿人对我们做的proteasome很了解。讲一下当时投稿发生的小插曲吧。这家杂志是让投稿人自己推荐审稿人的。师姐说一般都在谷歌学术里搜一下,找几个QSAR方面的大牛就可以了。原因有二:一是大牛很厉害,可以提供很好很专业的审稿意见;二是大牛不会为难咱们这些小虾米。然后,我就这么着,找了俩大牛当审稿人。当时带我做实验的老师知道后,很光火,狠狠地训了我一顿。因为他跟这家杂志的几个审稿人很熟,如果我推荐他认识的那几个人当审稿人会比较保险。投完文章后,我惴惴不安,担心被拒,也觉得自己太自以为是了,没有事先问老师。最后,文章收到了revise。事实证明,师姐的话也是有道理的。所以说推荐审稿人的两种方式其实应该都可行的。
PS:IJMS是收费杂志,IF是2点几吧。我估摸着可能是收费的原因,所以接受率比较高吧。

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zhtear99: 金币+15, 感谢来稿~~~ 2012-12-02 12:37:16
zhtear99: 回帖置顶 2012-12-02 12:37:18
去年投稿的审稿意见:
Reviewer A:

Comments for Reviewer's Assessment:
        The quality of English writing is very poor and the document must be
revised by an native english speaking person. See my remarks in the enclosed
file.

Comments for the Authors:
        Interesting paper with a good patent review. The document requires major modifications and answers to my remarks as proposed in the enclosed file.

Reviewer B:

Comments for Reviewer's Assessment:
        The authors review approaches for addressing naphthenic acid corrosion, including usage of inhibitors, solvent extraction, chemical conversion, thermal treatment, and hydrotreatment.  The review covers an important topic that will be of interest to the journals' readership and focuses upon patents between 2000 and 2011.  Whilst the manuscript provides a summary of the methods employed, it does not provide much detail, making it harder for the reader to evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of each.  The reviewer would recommend providing some additional description to strengthen the manuscript.
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普通回帖

zhtear99: 金币+1, 嘿嘿,小刚也来参与下吧~ 2012-11-29 20:05:23
图片挂了~还有出现了 font字样哈~

在美化一下哈~

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2楼: Originally posted by lxg133298 at 2012-11-29 16:42:12
图片挂了~还有出现了 font字样哈~

在美化一下哈~

窘ing~
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辛苦啦~~


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4楼: Originally posted by lxg133298 at 2012-11-29 16:55:23
辛苦啦~~

谢谢小刚~
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 谢谢哈,参与参与呗~ 2012-11-29 19:08:59
占个座先
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 呵呵,欢迎wg423超版参与啊~ 2012-11-29 19:11:28
还以为是论文投稿版的活动呢
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 谢谢哈,若能参与更好~ 2012-11-29 19:10:10
来支持一下
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我表示没有看懂啊。。。。
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 呵呵,这里不讨论中文的哈~ 2012-11-29 19:31:46
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11楼: Originally posted by zhtear99 at 2012-11-29 19:21:32
就是你投稿时,审稿人针对你的文章提出的审稿意见哈~...

刚读研,还没有过,这个。。。中文的算吗
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 嘿嘿,古妞先来一篇吧~ 2012-11-29 19:32:04
有看过的,挪用不

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10楼: Originally posted by 永远不知道 at 2012-11-29 19:18:18
我表示没有看懂啊。。。。

吱吱 你没看懂神马??
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14楼: Originally posted by lxg133298 at 2012-11-29 19:24:37
吱吱 你没看懂神马??
...

现在懂了,你个。。。。。
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 呵呵,谢谢O版。热烈欢迎来稿哇~~ 2012-11-29 19:39:42

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zhtear99: 金币+1, 谢谢哈,欢迎参与活动~ 2012-11-29 20:02:56
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 嘿嘿,谢谢O版师傅~欢迎参与活动~ 2012-11-29 20:04:22
偶徒弟如今也带徒弟了么,,支持

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13楼: Originally posted by 古可ぷ at 2012-11-29 19:24:14
有看过的,挪用不

可以啊,经别人同意就好,或者注明出处呗~
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littleroad

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zhtear99: 金币+1, 小路有什么意见,不妨提出来啊。 2012-11-29 21:17:38
虽不知但觉历。。。
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 嘿嘿,感谢关注,若能参与更好~ 2012-11-29 23:13:11
Good!

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zhtear99: 金币+1, 吼吼~~~ 2012-11-29 23:11:21
先顶之。回头找找发出来。
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 嗯嗯,偶会努力滴,谢谢师傅~ 2012-11-29 23:11:50
徒弟加油哈\(^o^)/~
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 嘿嘿,恭候哈~ 2012-11-30 00:00:01
占个位,回头编辑下
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 好~~~~ 2012-11-30 11:37:58
嗯,看明白了,今天有些忙,回头找些贴上。
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 感谢关注哈,若能参与更好~ 2012-11-30 11:42:59
关注……
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zhaopingrui

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zhtear99: 金币+1, 感谢支持~~~ 2012-11-30 11:43:14
路过,我也来支持一下
37楼2012-11-30 08:59:46
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 呵呵,谢谢盼妞区长支持,欢迎参与~~ 2012-11-30 11:40:36
支持一个
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laojiepaopao

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zhtear99: 金币+1, 呵呵,以后就有了~ 2012-11-30 11:41:08
我才研一啊,没发过文章,过来学习一下嘿嘿
39楼2012-11-30 09:26:59
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 嘿嘿,感谢liziyu,可否来参加活动呢? 2012-11-30 11:41:39
太赞了,送花一朵!
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 感谢支持,如果有其他好的建议或想法可以提出来哈~ 2012-11-30 11:44:59
顶一下,希望以后多举办此类活动。
42楼2012-11-30 10:10:22
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40楼: Originally posted by liziyu521 at 2012-11-30 09:30:58
太赞了,送花一朵!

我是来学习的!呵呵
本人才识浅薄!
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43楼: Originally posted by liziyu521 at 2012-11-30 15:36:14
我是来学习的!呵呵
本人才识浅薄!...

不存在哈,大家互相学习~
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 嘿嘿,没关系,这个活动会持续比较长的时间~祝你好运,也期望你来参与活动~ 2012-11-30 21:46:51
不好意思,我刚发,等结果ing~~~~
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20楼: Originally posted by 昵称让人头疼 at 2012-11-29 19:57:49
偶徒弟如今也带徒弟了么,,支持

师父,您回来了。
出差都木有敢打扰你。
49楼2012-11-30 23:07:17
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2012-11-29 19:16   回复  
zhtear99: 金币+1, 欢迎来稿~~~ 2012-11-29 19:19:49
支持下
2012-11-29 19:27   回复  
zhtear99: 金币+1, 谢谢哈,欢迎参加本次活动~ 2012-11-29 19:32:22
祝福祝福
2012-11-29 21:02   回复  
zhtear99: 金币+1, 谢谢~希望你可以参与到活动中来~ 2012-11-29 21:06:02
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 欢迎来稿哈~ 2012-11-29 23:12:16
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 希望你也能参与这个活动~ 2012-11-29 23:12:44
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 鼓励参与活动哈~ 2012-11-30 11:42:23
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 感谢关注,若能参与更好~ 2012-11-30 11:42:37
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 欢迎参与活动哈~ 2012-11-30 11:43:32
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 欢迎来稿哈~ 2012-11-30 11:43:48
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 感谢羊老大的关注,期待参与啊,呵呵~ 2012-11-30 11:44:28
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zhtear99: 金币+1, 欢迎来稿~~~ 2012-11-30 23:05:28
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