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1.     The manuscript is not well organized in writing. Authors should present the paper in good English (in passive voice) which can be understood by the journal's readership.
2.     In section Abstract, it is mentioned that "¡­¡­laser to imitate the unique structure of some soil animals¡­..". What does it mean? Please describe.
3.     What are the other methods by which property of GCI can be improved?
4.     Description of process used to prepare samples by Electric Spark Machine is required in Section 2.1.
5.     In section 2.3, it is mentioned that "¡­¡­..fatigue wear tests were carried out on home-made wear machine¡­.". Give specification details and working principle of home-made wear machine.
6.     In Section 2.4, how the parameters have been selected for execution of fatigue wear tests.
7.     "The D-value of the mass of sample before and after experimental regard¡­.". Fatigue wear test results should be illustrated in tabular form in the manuscript. Also the major findings from the work should be explained in more details.
8.     In Section 3.3, the description contains mostly the review of past similar research. So this section may be eliminated from the Section 3 and may be added to Introduction Section.




Reviewer #3: After reviewing this article I found very consistent with the computer model and results presented. I do recommend to publish it as it is.
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