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spring2006616

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[求助] 请大家帮帮忙,看一下这两个句子对吗?

正在给国外审稿:
其中introduction中有这么两句:
As it is well known that a good biomaterial should possess the fundamental properties such as better mechanical properties, superior biocompatibility, enhanced wear and corrosion resistance [2] in biological environment. The titanium materials meet these requirements to a very high degree.

个人感觉是不对的,应该去掉第一句中的As,不知在下的理解对不对?
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zhywu

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
是要去掉,一般是用As we know, 或 It is well known that

such as 前面那句后面用逗号断开较好
2楼2012-08-08 15:13:25
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spring2006616

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2楼: Originally posted by zhywu at 2012-08-08 15:13:25
是要去掉,一般是用As we know, 或 It is well known that

such as 前面那句后面用逗号断开较好

向您请教一下,As we know 能用吗?(好像能用)
It is well known that 肯定是要用的
3楼2012-08-08 15:23:34
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visitor958

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
As 肯定要去掉了。
4楼2012-08-08 16:22:58
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love_dullboy

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to a very high degree ? 呵呵,感觉有些生硬,典型国人的写法。

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Andysky87

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
对呀,感觉很中国式的英语呀。有了As就没有主语了,结构都不对了
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lisanan_xu

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
AS 肯定要去掉,同时to a very high degree 去掉,改成very well.
lisa
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lisanan_xu

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也可以写成As we know, a good biomaterial should possess.......,such as ......
lisa
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yantaishi

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
well known as it is
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好猫王

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对的。
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