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[交流] BSE 审稿人意见讨论

最近投BSE，修了2次，第二次按照审稿人意见修改，结果审稿人不满意，发了下面一段话，请懂的人帮忙指点下，谢谢
The latter part of Section 4 still needs to be modified as it reads as a list of information about species that contain the compounds. The authors have made no attempt to look at the systematic context of this information. Please note the changes in punctuation as well as spelling.
[The following section does not provide any scientific information to the reader other than a list - do the species all belong to a section within the genus ???????? suggest the authors work with a specialist on the genus to assist them improve this section of the text.]
Compound 6 has been isolated from eight other species of Alpinia, such as A. katsumadai (Kuroyanagi et al., 1983), Alpinia mutica (Sirat et al., 1996), A. nutans (Habsah et al., 2003), A. rafflesiana (Mohamad et al., 2004), A. officinarum (An et al., 2006), A.galanga (Kumar et al., 2007), A. malaccensis (Nuntawong and Suksamrarn, 2008) and A. calcarata (Hema and Nair, 2009). Compound 4 has been isolated from the rhizomes of A. conchigera (Athamaprasangsa et al., 1994), A. officinarum (Luo et al., 1998) and A. calcarata (Hema and Nair, 2009). Compound 10 has been reported from the rhizomes of A. officinarum (An et al., 2006). Compound 14 has been found in A. tonkinensis (Zhang et al., 2003) and A. officinarum (Luo et al., 1998; An et al., 2006). Compound 2 has been obtained from the rhizomes of Zingiber zerumbet (Zingiberaceae ) (Nakatani et al., 1991). Compound 15 has been isolated from the seeds of A. nigra (Qiao et al., 2007).
The phenolic acids 3 and 5 have been reported in the oil of Alpinia zerumbet (Elzaawely et al., 2007b), A. galanga (Zhu et al., 2008) and other genera in the family Zingiberaceae (Hou et al., 1999; Jang, et al., 2004; Bao et al., 2010). Compound 9 has been previously isolated form A. zerumbet (Xu et al., 1995) and the rhizomes of A. galanga (Kaur et al., 2010).
The monoterpene compound 11 has been reported in the A. densibracteata (Sy and Brown, 1997).Compounds 1, 12 and 13 have been previously isolated from many species of Alpinia (Luo et al., 2000; Zhang et al., 2003; Habsah et al., 2003; Giang et al., 2005; Hema and Nair, 2009) and they are very common secondary metabolite in many other species of plants.
大概懂审稿人的意思，但是不会修改？请有经验的前辈给些修改意见，谢谢！

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23楼: Originally posted by 周辛夷 at 2012-07-17 10:55:23
谢谢，在努力看文献。只是不知道怎样总结。因为很多化合物在这个属的其他植物也存在。
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我有一篇BSE也还在投，据上次小修有至少三四个月了，这个杂志就是慢，编审比较磨人，但是中的几率还是满高的。很多化合物在这个属的其他植物也在这点很好啊，你就可以总结说这些化合物或者这类化合物是这个属通有的啊，当然语句要用的客气点别那么肯定，毕竟化学分类学主观因素还是满重的。另外看看有没有只有在你那个植物中特有的，你可以说这个可能能成为指标性成分。此外还可以据共有化合物的多少提出也许这个植物跟某几个植物具有较为接近的亲缘关系。一般就这么几个方面总结