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Answer: Thank you very much for your suggestion, your suggestion is very pertinent, our English language do need to be improved. Through re-reading of the full paper carefully, we have found a lot of phrases and grammatical errors, all of the errors have been revised. We also have invited several English teachers proofread the whole paper, I hope it is more clear and accurate now of this revised paper on the English expression.
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Thanks very much for your comments, which are very helpful for us to improve the manuscript, and our language should be improved. After carefully check, we found many grammar and sentence errors, and have modified the manuscript accordingly. Furthermore, we have invited several English teachers help correct grammar and sentences, and we hope the revised paper will be more clear and accurate on expressions.
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