[求助] 求助一下，这个英文语句的校正该如何修改呢？

5楼: Originally posted by 无名小冰冰 at 2021-09-30 08:44:29
我想表达的意思是：

如果磨辊的耐磨层大部分脱落或者不均匀磨损了，主要工作部件将失去其碾压性能。

我感觉也是用mostly比较好。但是后面的 stop rolling? dysfuncion?不知道该如何用。...

2楼: Originally posted by 无名小冰冰 at 2021-09-30 00:30:12
是不是应该不使用从句呢、改成：
If the abrasion-resistant layers of the grinding roller are essentially peeled off or unevenly worn, the main working parts to almost lose their rolling action.

这样 ...

7楼: Originally posted by 无名小冰冰 at 2021-09-30 08:49:47
或者是把then去掉，这样是不是比较合理？

If the abrasion-resistant layers of the grinding roller are mostly peeled off or unevenly worn, the main working parts will stop rolling....

3楼: Originally posted by Chancy007 at 2021-09-30 01:26:01
原句只有 IF... ，没有 what WILL happen，所以不是完整句子。这句话可以改成：
If the abrasion-resistant layers of the grinding roller are essentially peeled off or unevenly worn,  the main working part ...

4楼: Originally posted by Chancy007 at 2021-09-30 01:27:43
也不对，后半句应该用‘will lose’做谓语动词，而你用的是‘to (almost) lose’。修改后的句子还是不完整。...

4楼: Originally posted by Chancy007 at 2021-09-30 01:27:43
也不对，后半句应该用‘will lose’做谓语动词，而你用的是‘to (almost) lose’。修改后的句子还是不完整。...

8楼: Originally posted by Chancy007 at 2021-09-30 13:34:33
【失去】lose/reduce/negatively impacted
【碾压性能】rolling performance （这是专业词汇，请参考你们领域英文paper的用词）
【失去碾压性能】逐字翻译:   ...，the rolling performance of the main working ...