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lqjsunny

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[求助] 论文投稿意见回来了,大修,有个reviewer意见不知道怎么回答,恳请各位大神支招啊 已有3人参与

The manuscript is not suitable for publication in its current form. There are numerous of grammar errors and at several points the paper needs to be rewritten. I suggest to the authors to be helped by a native english speaker in order to improve the english language.
The work lacks of proper experimental design (including the methods used) which leads to no critical discussion of the results. Furthermore, there are a lot of very important-relevant to the subject-missing references, especially in the subject of antibiofilm activity of natural constituents. In addition, some findings of the current study are on the contrary of the results of literature without any simple explanation or at least a discussion (e.g. Gram- bacteria less sensitive than Gram+, MIC of thymol is not so higher than MIC of antibiotics-in many cases thymol is much more effective and this happens to biofilms too, there are a lot of works with regards to the antibiofilm activity of essential oils very rich in thymol- no discussion at all).
不明白审稿人这句话什么意思“The work lacks of proper experimental design (including the methods used) which leads to no critical discussion of the results. Furthermore, there are a lot of very important-relevant to the subject-missing references,”,这是不是没有修改的机会了,为啥提到 experimental design,还是前面那句话只是原因,重要的是我的讨论部分不好,我把讨论部分改下,修会接受的机会会有多大?第一次投稿……恳请各位大神支招
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The work lacks of proper experimental design (including the methods used) which leads to no critical discussion of the results. Furthermore, there are a lot of very important-relevant to the subject-missing references, especially in the subject of antibiofilm activity of natural constituents. In addition, some findings of the current study are on the contrary of the results of literature without any simple explanation or at least a discussion (e.g. Gram- bacteria less sensitive than Gram+, MIC of thymol is not so higher than MIC of antibiotics-in many cases thymol is much more effective and this happens to biofilms too, there are a lot of works with regards to the antibiofilm activity of essential oils very rich in thymol- no discussion at all).
因为缺乏恰当的实验设计(包括所用方法),所以对结果的讨论也没能展开。没有引用许多重要相关文献;另外,有些结果与文献报道相左,却没有给出合理解释甚至没有讨论。
对于这部分意见我想你的关键是对文献不熟悉,或者不知道怎么利用文献(我猜测是前者)。没有提出重新进行实验设计或者重新实验,你可以好好看看相关文献,把实验部分内容重新组织一下,在描述具体实验时尽可能引用相关文献,以表明你的实验不是随意的,设计也是有根有据的。还有就是好好读几篇文献,参考一下对你的结果像样的讨论一下,不是对结果的简单重复。不管是好的结果、坏的结果都作出合理的解释和讨论。
语言问题需要解决,这是基本要求和前体。
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我的理解,需要修改语言,格式,实验,讨论,参考文献。看修改的程度,按照意见尽量逐条修改到,有希望的!加油!

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2楼: Originally posted by wdlgezi at 2015-01-17 17:34:03
我的理解,需要修改语言,格式,实验,讨论,参考文献。看修改的程度,按照意见尽量逐条修改到,有希望的!加油!

实验部分怎么修改&我感觉到很捉急……是重新做实验吗??审稿人太含糊了,目前我就把讨论部分、语言好好的改了……
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hy2001

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是说你没有实验导致讨论部分写的不好
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