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* Add references as noted.  Should use primary references.  Long lists of citations are not needed.  Format needs to be consistent and should follow journal format.
* See figures for minor suggestions for improvement.
* The use of reduced sulfur as a measure of anoxia in lacustrine settings is limited by the availability of sulfate.  Authors need to take this into consideration in their discussion.  Could the differences among the sub-basins reflect the availability of sulfate as well as redox state?
* Figure calls in the manuscript are not correct throughout the manuscript.
* Need to consider alternatives (e.g., see Curiale) when examining the isotope record.
* Support documentation for sedimentation rate needs to be provided.
* As presented the term "sedimentation rate" is not correct and needs to be clarified.
* Clarify why a high sedimentation rate would be associated with the formation of a deep lake.  Similarly, low sedimentation influx does not equal a shallow lake.
* Need to comment on the relationship between wind and stratificiation.

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
* Add references as noted.  Should use primary references.  Long lists of citations are not needed.  Format needs to be consistent and should follow journal format.
参考文献需要来源于最初的,不需要引用表,格式需遵循杂志的格式
See figures for minor suggestions for improvement.
数据需要进一步改善
就会这些,仅供参考!
机遇总是垂青于有准备的人。。。
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