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moriarty4869

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[交流] 一审意见是大修,内附审稿意见,诸位大神帮忙看看发表的可能性大吗? 已有4人参与

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Reviewer #1: The paper is good and written well. The gaps in the original ××× are properly addressed. The following modifications are necessary.
1.     What is slice about the multidimensional objective function describing the trend of the function. This needs to be explained. What does this mean and what is the base of this statement.
2.     Page 3, paragraph 3: what is meant by 'minimizing every single agent'?
3.     The Rosenbrock function problems have also been solved in ×××× with different sampling spaces for individual agents. The performance comparison to these cases needs to be done as well.
4.     In detail discuss the difference between the neighborhood approach implemented in ×××  and the ×× method here. How they are different, advantages, limitations, etc. This is very important.
5.     I guess Askley function needs to be corrected to Ackley function.
6.     The use of dog-leg method needs to be justified.
7.     The possible disadvantages and limitations of the method in this paper must be listed. This will not reduce the novelty of the approach.




Reviewer #2: I am quite intrigued by this article. It appears to present an important advance to one type
of **, known as ***, by combining it with a sophisticated *** method.
However I cannot tell - the paper is too poorly written. So I cannot recommend that it be
published in its current form. Perhaps after a MAJOR revision.

1) First, the authors should have someone with better command of English proof-read the paper.

However there are lots of presentation problems that have nothing to do with command
of English:

2) As a minor matter, there are many weird formatting problems, like hyphenating words between
two consonants, having citations appear after a sentence, having figure captions too small
to read, etc. These just distract the reader, and are annoying.

3) Most importantly, much of the text is not understandable. E.g., the sentence starting
"Particularly, when gradients contain expectation or conditional expectation ...", the
paragraph starting "However, the adoption of Monte-Carlo sampling ..", the paragraph
starting "Note that the equation constraint ..", definition 2 (and more generally all
of the mathematics), the entire discussion on p. 6, etc.

4) There should be much more connection with the literature. For example, ** falls in
the same spirit as ***, ****, etc., and should be related to them. Similarly, it
not ** that ** should be compared to, but distributed ***. Another oversight is that the
authors only consider "****", without any discussion of the more
recent version of **, known as "****".

In summary, I think there is substantial advance buried within this paper that should
be made broadly known to the research community. However I cannot extract it by
reading the paper in its current form.
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huifangl

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小木虫: 金币+0.5, 给个红包,谢谢回帖
虽然是大修,针对每条意见逐条仔细修改和说明,录用的机会就很大的。祝福楼主顺利
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hxgu

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小木虫: 金币+0.5, 给个红包,谢谢回帖
个人感觉希望还是比较大的,可能主要是英文不好表达的不清楚,你认真按照两个审稿人的意见逐一修改,并认真写回复意见,然后最好找个专业修英文论文的polish一下,或者身边高手改一下,希望很大的,第一个人对你印象很好,第二个虽然给了major但是如果你按他意见修改好应该是可以通过的,加油!
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tianjinzxl

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编辑只要给你了修改,就是给了你接收的机会。况且你的审稿意见都很正面,按照意见好好修改,接收的希望很大。
If it's nor trying, you are not trying hard enough!
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eagles123

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就我的经验和观察, 只要给大修,并且按照每个意见认真修改,最后录用率是非常非常高的
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