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Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #1: The paper is good and written well. The gaps in the original ××× are properly addressed. The following modifications are necessary. 1. What is slice about the multidimensional objective function describing the trend of the function. This needs to be explained. What does this mean and what is the base of this statement. 2. Page 3, paragraph 3: what is meant by 'minimizing every single agent'? 3. The Rosenbrock function problems have also been solved in ×××× with different sampling spaces for individual agents. The performance comparison to these cases needs to be done as well. 4. In detail discuss the difference between the neighborhood approach implemented in ××× and the ×× method here. How they are different, advantages, limitations, etc. This is very important. 5. I guess Askley function needs to be corrected to Ackley function. 6. The use of dog-leg method needs to be justified. 7. The possible disadvantages and limitations of the method in this paper must be listed. This will not reduce the novelty of the approach. Reviewer #2: I am quite intrigued by this article. It appears to present an important advance to one type of **, known as ***, by combining it with a sophisticated *** method. However I cannot tell - the paper is too poorly written. So I cannot recommend that it be published in its current form. Perhaps after a MAJOR revision. 1) First, the authors should have someone with better command of English proof-read the paper. However there are lots of presentation problems that have nothing to do with command of English: 2) As a minor matter, there are many weird formatting problems, like hyphenating words between two consonants, having citations appear after a sentence, having figure captions too small to read, etc. These just distract the reader, and are annoying. 3) Most importantly, much of the text is not understandable. E.g., the sentence starting "Particularly, when gradients contain expectation or conditional expectation ...", the paragraph starting "However, the adoption of Monte-Carlo sampling ..", the paragraph starting "Note that the equation constraint ..", definition 2 (and more generally all of the mathematics), the entire discussion on p. 6, etc. 4) There should be much more connection with the literature. For example, ** falls in the same spirit as ***, ****, etc., and should be related to them. Similarly, it not ** that ** should be compared to, but distributed ***. Another oversight is that the authors only consider "****", without any discussion of the more recent version of **, known as "****". In summary, I think there is substantial advance buried within this paper that should be made broadly known to the research community. However I cannot extract it by reading the paper in its current form. |
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