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暗香hch

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[求助] 摘要中的3句话,帮忙翻译成英文的,要被动语态的,大谢啊

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        我最近投稿的论文回来返修,说是英文摘要里面都有被动语态,不用主动语态,但是我下面3句话我不知道该怎样改更专业,请各位虫友帮忙给翻译下,谢谢
1) 涂层致密度较高,两种涂层晶相都以γ-Al2O3为主并含有一定量非晶相;
2) 涂层防滑性能良好;
3) 两种涂层耐磨性能良好,低速时涂层失效形式以颗粒“拔出”为主,随着速度增加,层间裂纹扩展引起的层片剥落主导了涂层的磨损失效。

我的翻译内容是:
1)  the two coating have a dense microstructure and the main phase is comprised of γ-Al2O3 and with some amorphous;
2) The two coating have a good anti-skidding property;
3) Tribology tests show that the two coatings have excellent wear resistant. The primary wear mechanism of the coatings at the lower speed is grain “pulled-out” and spalling wear aroused by the propagation of the interlamination crack becomes more dominant as the speed increased.
请各位虫友给点意见,帮忙翻译下,大恩不言谢啊
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爱与雨下: 金币+1 2013-09-17 07:17:59
暗香hch(phu_grassman代发): 金币+5, thanks for taking parting in the discussion. 2014-01-16 16:03:06
我也不懂 仅供参考
1)  the two coating are covered with a dense
microstructure and show
comprised of γ-Al2O3 with some
amorphous;
2) Both two coating are covered with a good anti-skidding
property;
3) Tribology tests show that the two coatings
have excellent wear resistant. The wear is " pulled out" at  lower
speed leading to the abrasion and  can be worn-outed due to interlamination crack  as the speed increased.

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2楼2013-08-26 10:52:18
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爱与雨下: 金币+1 2013-09-17 07:18:05
暗香hch(phu_grassman代发): 金币+8, good 2014-01-16 16:03:37
以下仅供参考:
1. The coating is compact and the microstructure of both coatings is dominated by γ-Al2O3 and contains some amorphous
2. Both coatings have excellent anti-skidding property
3. Both coatings demonstrate excellent wear resistance. At low speed the coating failure mechanism is dominated by grain being pulled out while with increased speed,  layer stripping due to interlaminal crack propagation is the main cause of coating wear failure.
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3楼2013-09-16 19:14:53
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暗香hch(phu_grassman代发): 金币+8, thanks for your advice 2014-01-16 16:03:49
供参考:
1) The two coatings, both of which are γ-Al2O3-based with a certain amount of amorphous phase, are of high density ;
2) The two coatings possess a good anti-skidding property;
3) The two coatings exhibit excellent wear resistance.  The primary wear mechanism of the coatings at low speed is grain “pulled-out”, while spalling wear by the propagation of the interlayer crack becomes dominant as speed increases.
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暗香hch(phu_grassman代发): 金币+5, thanks 2014-01-16 16:04:08
我觉得你的中文描述就有问题存在,晶相这个词语对嘛? 还有 一般除了起裂的裂纹是一条外,裂纹扩展过程中是不是伴随着更多裂纹的产生呢?  裂纹扩展是propagation  这个词语。
1)These two coatings ,of high density, are both comprised of γ-Al2O3-based with a certain amount of amorphous phase,   ;
2) These two coatings possess decent anti-skidding property;
3) The two coatings exhibit favorable wear resistance in tribiology tests.  The failure mechanism of the coatings at low velocity is grain being “pulled-out”, while the spalling wear caused by the propagation of the interlaminar cracks become dominant failure mode as speed increases.
5楼2013-10-06 23:22:49
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真强必胜: 金币+1, 谢谢 2014-01-16 11:28:08
暗香hch(phu_grassman代发): 金币+4, thanks 2014-01-16 16:04:15
1) 涂层致密度较高,两种涂层晶相都以γ-Al2O3为主并含有一定量非晶相;
2) 涂层防滑性能良好;
3) 两种涂层耐磨性能良好,低速时涂层失效形式以颗粒“拔出”为主,随着速度增加,层间裂纹扩展引起的层片剥落主导了涂层的磨损失效。
(1) The two high-density coatings are composed mainly of γ-Al2O3 cystals and a certain amount of amorphous phase.
(2)The coatings present anti-skidding property well.
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