[交流] “ Eight hours within for living while eight hours beyond for progress ”？

I have translated this sentence for english just now， “ Eight hours within for living while eight hours beyond for progress ” ，    but I feel it's not idiomatic ，so how can I say if I want to make it more  idiomaticer？     Thanks [ Last edited by eye00 on 2012-6-7 at 11:22 ]

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