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a05376013

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[交流] IELTS 作文一篇,希望各路大侠能多多点评!小弟求拍砖啊

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
In present-day society, individuals hold the opinion that happiness is crucial in daily life. Meanwhile, what is happiness has triggered much argumentation since there is not clear defination about the topic. The essay will examine it according to several different aspects which I believe, currently, are common viewpoints.

To start with, people have various understanding about happiness due to divergent parenting and cultural background. For instance, citizens living in city area possibly argue that owning a big house is happiness as the housing price is extremely high in big cities such as Beijing and Shanghai, up to forty thousand RMB per square. However, residents in rural area maybe hold the belief that happiness is getting a harvest that rewards their efforts. Another essential reason is that, during different era, people hold different understanding on happiness. For example, in the past, people considered that going to where they wanted by bike instead of walking was happiness while, nowadays, due to increasingly boosting economy and technology, inhabitants are only satisfied with driving cars as vehicles.

In my opinion, I think that insistence is the most crucial respect for acquiring happiness. If everyone could persist on what they are engaging in and never give up, people would constantly perceive life is meaningful and saturated with hopes and happiness. Nonetheless, people who have no ambitions to chase after a set of failures, absolutely, consider life is very boring and doomy.

In conclusion, the difficulty for defining happiness is mainly due to two factors. For one thing, people hold diversity of understandings on happiness. Furthermore, there is not constant opinion about happiness because of social development. Obviously, insistence plays a dominant role in pursuing happiness.
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a05376013(金币+1):谢谢参与
good luck for you! ~~~
2楼2012-02-19 13:46:37
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太模板了,估计很难的高分!
4楼2012-02-19 14:59:34
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: Originally posted by beimi at 2012-02-19 14:59:34:
太模板了,估计很难的高分!

这个。。。我看剑桥山范文也是这种格式啊,我也没有故意模板化,可能还是受影响了
5楼2012-02-19 16:07:20
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beimi

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5楼: Originally posted by a05376013 at 2012-02-19 16:07:20:
这个。。。我看剑桥山范文也是这种格式啊,我也没有故意模板化,可能还是受影响了

这个很难的高分的,万一碰到变态考官,你就完了,直接4-5分的,
6楼2012-02-19 17:58:18
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a05376013

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: Originally posted by beimi at 2012-02-19 17:58:18:
这个很难的高分的,万一碰到变态考官,你就完了,直接4-5分的,

啊!!!我甚至都没看过范文啊!看来要另起炉灶啊!
7楼2012-02-19 20:24:32
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lenglingying

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a05376013(金币+1):谢谢参与
你的语言描写挺不错的, 不过写作文没有不要这么死板哦, 祝福你!
8楼2012-02-20 11:18:09
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a05376013

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: Originally posted by lenglingying at 2012-02-20 11:18:09:
你的语言描写挺不错的, 不过写作文没有不要这么死板哦, 祝福你!

有道理,形成自己的风格很重要!
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mrzouhao

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a05376013(金币+1):谢谢参与
很不错
12楼2012-02-21 08:31:50
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a05376013(金币+1): 谢谢参与
顶一个吧,同时天涯沦落人,相逢何必曾相识。。。
13楼2012-04-03 10:29:13
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南京环球雅思培训学校是骗子学校,它的教师是假的,有的甚至是白天卖猪肉,晚上去环球雅思当VIP老师,客服也是假的,害人不浅.................
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5楼: Originally posted by a05376013 at 2012-02-19 16:07:20
这个。。。我看剑桥山范文也是这种格式啊,我也没有故意模板化,可能还是受影响了...

4-5分不久算是高分了吗?
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