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lingxiayidu

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[求助] 一审结束,让小修,但是里面的审稿意见有些理解不到,请各位帮忙看看,谢谢!

以下为审稿人的修改意见和评论(我对不理解的注明了自己的问题):

Reviewer #1: This is quite a nice paper however there are a number of enhancements that should be considered before it is acceptable for publication. I would suggest that the authors spend a bit more time honing the English as there are still number of translation errors. (这个是让作者提高英文表述的)

Altogether, I think the science is sound and is useful. A few enhancements to consider:

Fig 1a: I recognise that this is a schematic but remember that the impact surface will also move forward in time due to the shock. It might also be instructive to include the elastic wave trajectories as well. Unless I am missing something here......

p4 It is difficult to detect whether the targets are behaving elastically from the traces i.e., impact stress < HEL. The final stress state reached is 1.25Zigma HEL and so surely we should see evidence of the HEL. Can the authors clarify what is happening here? (这个问题到底想得到什么答案?由于论文中我没有给出HEL的具体值,这里是不是想问1.25倍的Zigma HEL是从哪里得到的? what is happening 用的太令人费解了)
It would be helpful if the authors could consider their errors and plot them on the final figure. (这句话是不是就是英语表述的一种,让作者按照上述意见修改的意思啊?应该不是针对论文的意见把?)
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