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hubeizlc

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[求助] 请问这句话该怎么改?

The results indicated that the copolymerization with these biodegradable aliphatic units, especially with that have side groups [25,26], could improve the degradation rate effectively.
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wgs8136(金币+1): 欢迎常来~ 2011-12-06 12:07:22
挺通顺的呀,感觉很好啦,还改呢?
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wgs8136(金币+2): 欢迎常来交流 ~ 2011-12-06 12:07:36
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The results indicated that the copolymerization with biodegradable aliphatic units, especially that have side groups, could increase the degradation rate effectively.
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hubeizlc(金币+1): 谢谢! 2011-12-06 16:36:39
The results indicated that the copolymerization with these biodegradable aliphatic units, especially with that have side groups [25,26], could improve the degradation rate effectively.

这句话的主语就不对,copolymerization怎么能improve the degradation rate?
我觉得这句话可以这么写
the results indicated that the degradation rate of this copolymer with the biodegradable aliphatic unit was imporved effectively, especially as the side groups [25,26].
或者
the results indicated that introducation of the biodegradable aliphatic unitto the copolymer , especially as the side groups [25,26], could improve the degradation rate effectively.
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