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小弟8月初投出的，23号返回的审稿意见，这个期刊没提大修小修，只有编辑说现阶段发表不能还有两个审稿意见，一个是英文方面的，The whole english of the paper should be improved，还有一些小的细节问题. 另外一个审稿人的意见就很不好处理了，具体如下 The authors examined the microstructure over the martensitic lath; however the measurements of packet size, block width and lath width are very vague. In addition the composition should be corrected and the tensile curves of the mechanical measurements need be reported. Then, the results can be verified through model, formulas and approaches. The paper at this stage will need lots of improvements. 大家帮忙看看，这个是要求大修么，前两条作修改补充或者解释还是可以的，但最后一条是要求文章往深入了作，这个应该怎么修改比较好，文章里面结果证明主要是通过formulas然后结合一些前人的数据，这里the results can be verified through model, formulas and approaches是认为分析不足，要求进一步证明么？还有Revised manuscript中回复审稿人意见有模板么，麻烦大家提供下。第一次投稿还请多多帮忙，谢谢。 |
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【答案】应助回帖
lrxfly(金币+10): 非常感谢~~~~ 2011-08-26 16:11:52
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按评审意见修改，下面是修改后回信的模板： Dear Editor, Thank you for your useful comments and suggestions on the language and structure of our manuscript. We have modified the manuscript accordingly, and detailed corrections are listed below point by point: 1) In its current state, the level of English throughout your manuscript does not meet the journal's required standard. Authors have the responsibility to present their papers in good English which can be understood by the journal's readership without difficulty. We have revised the WHOLE manuscript carefully and tried to avoid any grammar or syntax error. In addition, we have asked several colleagues who are skilled authors of English language papers to check the English. We believe that the language is now acceptable for the review process. 2) Please note that your abstract (250 words) has exceeded the maximum length of 150 words for research articles in this journal. The abstract has been revised and its word count is now 149. 3) Figures should be cited in sequential order in the main text. In your manuscript, Fig. 6 is provided but not cited. Please check and revise accordingly. Now all figures are provided and cited in sequence in the main text. 4) A cover letter should include the following statement: the manuscript has not been previously published, is not currently submitted for review to any other journal, and will not be submitted elsewhere before a decision is made by this journal. This is not seen in your cover letter. The required information is now included in the cover letter. 5) The manuscript, including references, figure captions and tables, should be typewritten in uniform lettering and sizing, and with double spacing throughout. We now have used uniform lettering and sizing throughout the manuscript, with double spacing. 6) Please note that the reference style must conform strictly to the journal’s Guide for Authors. To specify one problem in the reference list provided, journal names are not abbreviated and page span not provided. We have checked all the references and formatted them strictly according to the Guide for Authors. Especially, journal names have been abbreviated and page span provided. The manuscript has been resubmitted to your journal. We look forward to your positive response. Sincerely, |
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