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小弟8月初投出的，23号返回的审稿意见，这个期刊没提大修小修，只有编辑说现阶段发表不能还有两个审稿意见，一个是英文方面的，The whole english of the paper should be improved，还有一些小的细节问题. 另外一个审稿人的意见就很不好处理了，具体如下 The authors examined the microstructure over the martensitic lath; however the measurements of packet size, block width and lath width are very vague. In addition the composition should be corrected and the tensile curves of the mechanical measurements need be reported. Then, the results can be verified through model, formulas and approaches. The paper at this stage will need lots of improvements. 大家帮忙看看，这个是要求大修么，前两条作修改补充或者解释还是可以的，但最后一条是要求文章往深入了作，这个应该怎么修改比较好，文章里面结果证明主要是通过formulas然后结合一些前人的数据，这里the results can be verified through model, formulas and approaches是认为分析不足，要求进一步证明么？还有Revised manuscript中回复审稿人意见有模板么，麻烦大家提供下。第一次投稿还请多多帮忙，谢谢。 |
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【答案】应助回帖
lrxfly(金币+10): 非常感谢~~~~ 2011-08-26 16:11:52
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按评审意见修改，下面是修改后回信的模板： Dear Editor, Thank you for your useful comments and suggestions on the language and structure of our manuscript. We have modified the manuscript accordingly, and detailed corrections are listed below point by point: 1) In its current state, the level of English throughout your manuscript does not meet the journal's required standard. Authors have the responsibility to present their papers in good English which can be understood by the journal's readership without difficulty. We have revised the WHOLE manuscript carefully and tried to avoid any grammar or syntax error. In addition, we have asked several colleagues who are skilled authors of English language papers to check the English. We believe that the language is now acceptable for the review process. 2) Please note that your abstract (250 words) has exceeded the maximum length of 150 words for research articles in this journal. The abstract has been revised and its word count is now 149. 3) Figures should be cited in sequential order in the main text. In your manuscript, Fig. 6 is provided but not cited. Please check and revise accordingly. Now all figures are provided and cited in sequence in the main text. 4) A cover letter should include the following statement: the manuscript has not been previously published, is not currently submitted for review to any other journal, and will not be submitted elsewhere before a decision is made by this journal. This is not seen in your cover letter. The required information is now included in the cover letter. 5) The manuscript, including references, figure captions and tables, should be typewritten in uniform lettering and sizing, and with double spacing throughout. We now have used uniform lettering and sizing throughout the manuscript, with double spacing. 6) Please note that the reference style must conform strictly to the journal’s Guide for Authors. To specify one problem in the reference list provided, journal names are not abbreviated and page span not provided. We have checked all the references and formatted them strictly according to the Guide for Authors. Especially, journal names have been abbreviated and page span provided. The manuscript has been resubmitted to your journal. We look forward to your positive response. Sincerely, |
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【答案】应助回帖
lrxfly(金币+10): 非常感谢~~~加油加油~~~ 2011-08-27 00:00:29
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这个审稿人很给力啊，个人觉得给的意见蛮好的，不管期刊如何，审稿人都给了他自己的意见，我觉得是个很负责的审稿人啊。 可能是表征不够有说服力，但我挺好奇，审稿人怎么没有提你机理说明不清呢？ 说明你的机理解释他还是认同的么，只是可能认为你的文章要发表的话，系统性还需要加强。 曾经有个师兄跟我讲，回复时候不能一味地低声下气，否则被人看不起，认为自己都没信心，怎么发？但也不能太拽，否则直接拒回。 所以很难把握，只能一下收一下放。。。 不好意思，说了等于白说，举个小例子，前几天有个师妹问我，样品处理前后孔结构没怎么变化怎么办啊？（原先预计是会变化的） 我说：你可以这样说：在样品经过。。。处理后，孔径分布并没有发生很大变化，说明此处理方法并未对原有的孔径造成破坏。。。 坏事说成好事，看怎么说了，祝楼主好运，二次审稿时候，审稿人心情好，直接录用。。。加油！~~ |
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