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又个七年

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[求助] 求大家看下,这样的成绩和作文要不要复议

作文悲剧三次,要不要复议,求大家指点
各位大侠,小弟也有关于复议的事情请教您一下。
我最近连续考了三次雅思,都是死在悲剧的作文上,眼看这申请奖学金的日期就要截止了啊,心急死了,请大家给点建议好吗
我的三次的情况是

           听力  阅读   写作  口语   总分

7月9号     7.5      7          5.5      6        6.5
6月4号     6.5      8.5       5.5      6        6.5
4月16号    6.5      7.5       5.5      6.5     6.5
其中6月4号的已经申请复议了,也写了申请复议的信,但是结果还要20多天才出来,不知道7月9号的这次有没有希望也申请复议呢,我现在真的是心急如焚啊,十月份再拿不到成绩,就要被推迟一年了啊,我的希望就是 作文6分就够了。
7月9号的这次考试,我把当时的大作文回忆了下,写出来了,80%的内容都是一样的,个别细节可能有点出入,求大侠看看是不是跑题了,值得复议吗?
题目:There  are many animals species extinct in the world nowadays. Some people say that the countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings than on those of animals. discuss both of views and give your opinion.
We are living in a world with more and more technology breakthrough and economic growth, but we are also living in a world with less and less animal specious. It is not surprising for many people arguing that we should protect the animals from dying out. However, many others believe that we should pay more attention on problems of human beings. In this essay, an endeavor is made to probe into the arguments on both sides of the issue before taking a stance.

There are many reasons for people hold the view that we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Though recent decades have witnessed tremendous changes in the world, both developed and developing countries still face many serious threats, such as water and food shortage, environment pollution, etc. The lack of fund and social resources also limit human’s ability to address these headaches. On the other hand, some animals are of high economic values, so many of them are killed for the human profits.

Superficially, the above view sounds reasonable. But after carefully weighing in mind, we find it goes against the fact. Animals, whether they are precious, are the gift of God. They are an important part of the nature and should be treated equally. In addition, the coexistence of human kind and animals is also the requirement of a real civilization and harmonious world. Not to say that some animals are important food resource for us, for example, pigs and chicken provide meat and eggs for people.

From above analysis and discussion, I am firmly confirmed that we should make effort to protect the animals form dying out. If we continue to cast an indifferent eye on animal protection, it will functioning as cement shoes for economic growth and social development.
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又个七年(金币+4): 谢谢你的建议~~ 2011-07-24 15:31:20
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Originally posted by zlj644 at 2011-07-24 11:15:26:
重新读了一遍雅思写作的评分标准,看了看楼主的作文,觉得还是不要复议了吧

Agree.
楼主极力想在用词上拔高分数;但是文章确实是没有address主题。
文章指出一部分人猎杀动物致使动物濒临灭绝,笔者不认同。
可是作文要求是说一些人大力提倡保护动物,一些人却认为应该把重点放在人类自身的问题上。
笔者那一点是呼应了主题?我觉得给5.5分都是看在笔者遣辞上。
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StephenXun(金币+1): 2011-07-24 11:54:24
重新读了一遍雅思写作的评分标准,看了看楼主的作文,觉得还是不要复议了吧
Theworldisalwayschanging.Nothingstaysthesame.Butlovestandsthetestoftime.
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又个七年(金币+4): 已经报名了8月13号的考试啊,这次去南昌,不在上海了,老是悲剧,谢谢兄弟 2011-07-24 15:30:15
如果时间来得及,楼主可以在考一次啊~加油,好运~
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Originally posted by zlj644 at 2011-07-24 11:15:26:
重新读了一遍雅思写作的评分标准,看了看楼主的作文,觉得还是不要复议了吧

不懂你的意思。我感觉框架是没问题的,可以复议一下,给个6分是合理的。
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