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In the lecture, the speaker definitely shows to us that the three proposed solutions mentioned in the reading aimed at ameliorating the dangerous situation of Torreya taxifoha will be inefficacious. The speaker offers detailed reasons for her attitudes.
       Firstly, the speaker mentions that it’s unrealistic to reestablish Torreya in the same location where the plants have flourished for thousands of years because their living environment has been more or less destroyed. The modern industrialization has a s. The large microclimate regions on which they depend so as to exuberant have disappeared. In particular, the global warming has risen the temperature beyond their toleration. In fact, the specie is accustomed to living in the cooler and wetter conditions.
    Secondly, it’s not feasible to move them to a different location. The speaker takes the instance of another plant which was once transferred to other places to illustrate the serious consequence of such a deed. They may kill the local plants once introd. This may in turn make other, even more kind of species to be extinguished.
    Thirdly, we can’t play a reliance on preserving them in the research centre. The plants are so large and diverse. How can we spare enough space and effort to cultivate them in a large scale in the research conditions? Obviously, this is just an utopian too



I can’t agree with the saying that students are more influenced by teachers than by their friends. Undoubtedly, no one attempts to deny the significance of teachers to students. But what I want to say is that friends with whom we get long in the everyday life influence us in a more decisive and comprehensive way. Here are my reasons.
        Many students have the experiences of trying to escape the vision of the teachers. Why? And have you ever heard anyone to repulse his good friends? It’s seldom this case. The friends are in the same ages with us and we just have endless topic to discuss and argue. Nevertheless, when you are confronted with your math teacher, it’s likely that all you can do is just mention some math problems. When I’m together with my friends, we can also discuss the same problem, and even in a lively atmosphere. Students may be trapped in a series of scruples facing a adult teacher and act punctilious to avoid offending them. But in front of your friend, they just discuss openly and express whatever different opinions.
       On the other hand, the teachers always appear to be so strict to keep the basic discipline needed. Their work concentrates on instilling us the specialized knowledge. So it’s obviously not suitable for most students to share with the teachers their problems in the daily life, like mental problems or financial problems. When I fails in a exam, or have a squabble with my parents, my friends always come to comfort me in time. For the healthy development of students, these mental-related problems may be more urgent to be addressed. You can obtain the knowledge in class later, but never can ignore these everyday displeasure.
       What’s more, we can always identify with our friend as we are in the same growing stage and may face the similar confusions. There is a duration when I was fascinated by the tennis. I directly abet my friend to join me even though he never plays that before. Because we are both glad to try something new after the relatively boring courses and we both loves exercise. We share the some interests.
In addition, we should notice that it’s hard for teachers to spare that much attention on every common student like me. The relationship is generally restricted in class, which is just a little part of our whole life. On the contrary, we spend most of the times with our friends, especially during the campus life. In the campus, the teachers just teach us for only a term, and it’s even a challenge for them to remember our names at terminal of the semester.
     These are the main reasons I space more in my heart for friends than teachers. I acknowledge that teachers are indispensable, but when comparing with the various friends that affect our life all the times, their significance apparently fades slightly.


[ Last edited by chaowang3eg on 2011-7-8 at 15:34 ]
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